Bonjour, svp aidez-moi, j'ai vraiment besoin d'aide. Corrigez lon texte et y ajouter du preterit serait un acte de gentillesse infini...
Hello, my name is , I am years old and I live in chambery in france. In life, I love science. I have been immersed in it since I was a child, thanks to my parents. ( My father is a and my mother is a ). When I was a child, I loved playing teacherwith my parents and my little sister who was only one year old. In activities, I have been teaching Arabic for 5 years, my mother tongue. This allows me to communicate with a part of my family that only speaks Arabic. Apart from that, I played clarinet for 7 years but I stopped this year, I was no longer interested. Thanks to science, I would like to invent a psychokinesis helmet
Hello, my name is , I am years old and I live in chambery in france. In life, I love science. I have been immersed in it since I was a child, thanks to my parents. ( My father is a and my mother is a ). When I was a child, I loved playing teacherwith my parents and my little sister who was only one year old. In activities, I have been teaching Arabic for 5 years, my mother tongue. This allows me to communicate with a part of my family that only speaks Arabic. Apart from that, I played clarinet for 7 years but I stopped this year, I was no longer interested. Thanks to science, I would like to invent a psychokinesis helmet
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* I learnt Arabic for 5 years, my mother's language
* Apart that
* I've played clarinet for 7 years
* Chambery et France prennent une majuscule ;)
* Pour éviter de répéter "When I was a child", tu peux simplement dire " In my childhood" ou "When I was young"
* Teacher n'est pas collé avec with
* "With my sister who was ..." ça fait un peu long, tu peux dire " With my one-year-old sister"
* Pas "that" après " a part of my family" ce serait mieux "which"