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In the Newscared Castle, Sir Philp Johnsohn was found dead on January 13th at 11a.m.. He was 42 years old, divorced man with any children. He was found by his neighbour, James Smith. They had to meet at 10a.m. to drink a coffee at James’ house. As Philip did not come, he decided to go in his living-room because he had the key of Philip’s house. When he entered, he found him dead and he called the police.
Two detectives went by car to the castle. They saw the door was locked in the inside. So Philip hadn’t to invite anyone and know the murderer. The window was open so they worked out that the murderer was sportive and thin to jump and enter by it. Then they dated the murder at 8a.m.. Next, the detectives left the house to inspect the garden where it was footprints. These footprints had to make by someone who had a leg prosthesis.
So the two detectives found two suspects in the case : the housekeeper, Mrs William June and the neighbour James Smith. They both had a prosthesis and were sportive and thin. But James Smith had an alibi : he was shopping at the time of the crime. So they worked out that the murderer was Mrs William. His motive was the steal of the Johnsohn’s money one week ago and he was in danger to going in prison.
Thanks to the clues, Mrs William was imprisoned for 30 years. But he didn’t admit the murder and he still claims his innocence.
Je dois rendre un devoir en anglais. Pourriez-vous me le corriger ? Merci d'avance.
In the Newscared Castle, Sir Philp Johnsohn was found dead on January 13th at 11a.m.. He was 42 years old, divorced man with any children. He was found by his neighbour, James Smith. They had to meet at 10a.m. to drink a coffee at James’ house. As Philip did not come, he decided to go in his living-room because he had the key of Philip’s house. When he entered, he found him dead and he called the police.
Two detectives went by car to the castle. They saw the door was locked in the inside. So Philip hadn’t to invite anyone and know the murderer. The window was open so they worked out that the murderer was sportive and thin to jump and enter by it. Then they dated the murder at 8a.m.. Next, the detectives left the house to inspect the garden where it was footprints. These footprints had to make by someone who had a leg prosthesis.
So the two detectives found two suspects in the case : the housekeeper, Mrs William June and the neighbour James Smith. They both had a prosthesis and were sportive and thin. But James Smith had an alibi : he was shopping at the time of the crime. So they worked out that the murderer was Mrs William. His motive was the steal of the Johnsohn’s money one week ago and he was in danger to going in prison.
Thanks to the clues, Mrs William was imprisoned for 30 years. But he didn’t admit the murder and he still claims his innocence.
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At Newscared Castle, Sir Philp Johnsohn was found dead on January 13th at 11 am. He was 42 years old, was a divorced man with no children. He was found by his neighbor, James Smith. They met at 10am. drink coffee at James's. Since Philip did not come, he decided to go to his living room because he had the key to Philip's house. When he came in, Philip was dead and then James called the police.
Two detectives are driven to the castle. They saw that the door was locked inside. Philip did not have to invite anyone and know the murderer. The window was open, so they understood that the murderer was sporty and slim to jump and get in there. Then they dated the murder at 8 o'clock in the morning. Then, the detectives left the house to inspect the garden where there was footprints. These prints had to be made by someone who had a prosthetic leg.
The two detectives found two suspects in the case: the housekeeper, Mrs. William June and the neighbor James Smith. They both had a prosthesis and were sporty and thin. But James Smith had an alibi: he was lecturing at the time of the crime. So they realized that the murderer was Mrs. William. His motive was stealing Johnsohn's money a week ago and he was at risk of going to jail.
Thanks to the clues, Ms. William has been put in prison for 30 years. But the murder is not admitted and he still claims his innocence.
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