BonjourJe dois rendre un devoir en anglais. Pourriez-vous me le corriger ? Merci d'avance.In the Newscared Castle, Sir Philp Johnsohn was found dead on January 13th at 11a.m.. He was 42 years old, divorced man with any children. He was found by his neighbour, James Smith. They had to meet at 10a.m. to drink a coffee at James’ house. As Philip did not come, he decided to go in his living-room because he had the key of Philip’s house. When he entered, he found him dead and he called the police. Two detectives went by car to the castle. They saw the door was locked in the inside. So Philip hadn’t to invite anyone and know the murderer. The window was open so they worked out that the murderer was sportive and thin to jump and enter by it. Then they dated the murder at 8a.m.. Next, the detectives left the house to inspect the garden where it was footprints. These footprints had to make by someone who had a leg prosthesis. So the two detectives found two suspects in the case : the housekeeper, Mrs William June and the neighbour James Smith. They both had a prosthesis and were sportive and thin. But James Smith had an alibi : he was shopping at the time of the crime. So they worked out that the murderer was Mrs William. His motive was the steal of the Johnsohn’s money one week ago and he was in danger to going in prison.Thanks to the clues, Mrs William was imprisoned for 30 years. But he didn’t admit the murder and he still claims his innocence.​
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Bonjour Je dois rendre un devoir en anglais. Pourriez-vous me le corriger ? Merci d'avance. In the Newscared Castle, Sir Philp Johnsohn was found dead on January 13th at 11a.m.. He was 42 years old, divorced man with any children. He was found by his neighbour, James Smith. They had to meet at 10a.m. to drink a coffee at James’ house. As Philip did not come, he decided to go in his living-room because he had the key of Philip’s house. When he entered, he found him dead and he called the police. Two detectives went by car to the castle. They saw the door was locked in the inside. So Philip hadn’t to invite anyone and know the murderer. The window was open so they worked out that the murderer was sportive and thin to jump and enter by it. Then they dated the murder at 8a.m.. Next, the detectives left the house to inspect the garden where it was footprints. These footprints had to make by someone who had a leg prosthesis. So the two detectives found two suspects in the case : the housekeeper, Mrs William June and the neighbour James Smith. They both had a prosthesis and were sportive and thin. But James Smith had an alibi : he was shopping at the time of the crime. So they worked out that the murderer was Mrs William. His motive was the steal of the Johnsohn’s money one week ago and he was in danger to going in prison. Thanks to the clues, Mrs William was imprisoned for 30 years. But he didn’t admit the murder and he still claims his innocence.
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