Bonjours j'ai fais une analyse de document en anglais pourriez vous me la corriger et rajouter si nécessaire ce que j'ai oublier ? merci :)

Of document is a preventive image against the unhealthy eating. We see a man hamburger which eats a hamburger. The image is to compromise of red and grey. The main subject and the consumption of unhealthy eating we thus put forward the bad food. The man has the area of (consumer) without moderation and (grosière) way. The character frighten. The message and clear, the unhealthy eating is dangerous it makes hooked.
This image informs us about it, to revolve her of dresses food. The unhealthy eating is a danger for the health of the individual.
I approve this image because it delivers an important message, I think that one must it be reasonable. These message warns against danger.