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j'ai un devoir d'Anglais à faire pour demain et je me pose la question si ce que j'ai fait et complet et juste, voici le sujet :
Je suis un photographe et j'explique pourquoi j'ai pris cette photo (Document ci-dessous), quel est mon opinion et quel message je veux faire passer.
Voici mon travail : I shot this photo because I want to denounce the conditions of lifes of little children in Pakistan. The work for ours parents. I think that I shot this photo because it's sad for this child who works all the days at his age. He has to oblige of work for win the money for help his familly. This photo makes me feel a sadness for this little child who works in bad conditions.
Merci
j'ai un devoir d'Anglais à faire pour demain et je me pose la question si ce que j'ai fait et complet et juste, voici le sujet :
Je suis un photographe et j'explique pourquoi j'ai pris cette photo (Document ci-dessous), quel est mon opinion et quel message je veux faire passer.
Voici mon travail : I shot this photo because I want to denounce the conditions of lifes of little children in Pakistan. The work for ours parents. I think that I shot this photo because it's sad for this child who works all the days at his age. He has to oblige of work for win the money for help his familly. This photo makes me feel a sadness for this little child who works in bad conditions.
Merci
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Bonjour !tu mets "shot" preterit et après présent......et il y a des répétitions(I shot this photo)
je te propose :
The reason why I shot this photo is mainly to show to the entire world the life conditions in Pakistan in spite of the international efforts to stop children labour. Through, this picture, I just want people to realize how young are the kids working all days instead of going to school . The poverty affects a third of the population, and they have to help their parents, for very few money and in very hard conditions.
j'espère que cela t'ira.....
Bonne soirée !!