Bonsoir , j'ai un exo a faire en anglais , (que j'ai déjà fais) .
j'aurais voulu que vous corrigiez mes fautes s'il vous plait .
Sachant que la consigne est la suivante :
écrivez une lettre a votre famille pour raconter le désastre (cyclone Matthew) que vous avez connu en Haïti , vous utiliserez le past perfect et le prétérit.
I am writing this letter to tell you first that I am fine but also tell you the horrible disaster that happened at home in Haiti
It was at the beginning of October there was a cyclone named Matthew who devastated everything including my house.
The south of the country was ravaged by gusts of wind blowing at 250 kilometers per hour and torrential rains that made rivers and flooded our homes.
More Matthew to aggravate the effects of climatic phenomena in a drought that leaves us not indifferent with 1.89 billion dollars of economic damage we are to 175000 people to have lost our housing, 546 dead according to the official record we saw 100% Of our damaged crops to the hardest hit areas
After the disaster
A month after the angry victims complain about the slow arrival of humanitarian aid.
A teenager shot and three people injured by a bullet during the humanitarian aid which degenerated
j'aurais voulu que vous corrigiez mes fautes s'il vous plait .
Sachant que la consigne est la suivante :
écrivez une lettre a votre famille pour raconter le désastre (cyclone Matthew) que vous avez connu en Haïti , vous utiliserez le past perfect et le prétérit.
I am writing this letter to tell you first that I am fine but also tell you the horrible disaster that happened at home in Haiti
It was at the beginning of October there was a cyclone named Matthew who devastated everything including my house.
The south of the country was ravaged by gusts of wind blowing at 250 kilometers per hour and torrential rains that made rivers and flooded our homes.
More Matthew to aggravate the effects of climatic phenomena in a drought that leaves us not indifferent with 1.89 billion dollars of economic damage we are to 175000 people to have lost our housing, 546 dead according to the official record we saw 100% Of our damaged crops to the hardest hit areas
After the disaster
A month after the angry victims complain about the slow arrival of humanitarian aid.
A teenager shot and three people injured by a bullet during the humanitarian aid which degenerated
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Le troisième paragraphe c'est bien.
Au quatrième paragraphe il faut mettre : "To add up, Matthew aggravated the effects.... Et c'est "economical damage" pas economic. Après economical damage met un point et débute la prochaine phrase avec 175000 people have lost their housing and 546 died according to... ensuite il faut mettre un point à "record" Ensuite l' autre phrase est "The areas that were hit the most, the crops were damaged by 100%. Au paragraphe suivant il faut mettre : "A month later, the angry victims complained about .... Et au dernier paragraphe : "Plus, a teenager was shot and three people were injured by...." J'espère que je t'ai aidé :)