[[Urgent]] Bonsoir , j'ai un exo a faire en anglais , (que j'ai déjà fais) . j'aurais voulu que vous corrigiez mes fautes s'il vous plait . Sachant que la consigne est la suivante : écrivez une lettre a votre famille pour raconter le désastre (cyclone Matthew) que vous avez connu en Haïti , vous utiliserez le past perfect et le prétérit.
I am writing this letter to tell you first that I am fine but also tell you the horrible disaster that happened at home in Haiti
It was at the beginning of October there was a cyclone named Matthew who devastated everything including my house.
The south of the country was ravaged by gusts of wind blowing at 250 kilometers per hour and torrential rains that made rivers and flooded our homes.
More Matthew to aggravate the effects of climatic phenomena in a drought that leaves us not indifferent with 1.89 billion dollars of economic damage we are to 175000 people to have lost our housing, 546 dead according to the official record we saw 100% Of our damaged crops to the hardest hit areas
After the disaster
A month after the angry victims complain about the slow arrival of humanitarian aid.
A teenager shot and three people injured by a bullet during the humanitarian aid which degenerated
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Lola93170
Correction : I am writing this letter to tell you first that I am fine, but also tell you the horrible disaster that happened at home in Haiti It was in the beginning of October there was a cyclone named Matthew who devastated everything including my house. The south of the country was ravaged by gusts of wind blowing at 250 kilometers per hour and torrential rains that made rivers and flooded our homes. More Matthew to aggravate the effects of climatic phenomena in a drought that leaves us not indifferent with 1.89 billion dollars of economic damage we are to 175000 people to have lost our housing, 546
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Kenny36
I am writing this letter to tell you: I am fine but most importantly about the horrible disaster that happened back home in Haiti. It all started the beginning of October,there was a cyclone named Matthew who devastated everything including my house. The south of the country was ravaged by gusts of wind blowing till 250 kilometers per hour and torrential rains that made rivers flooded our homes. More and more Matthew aggravate the effects of climatic phenomena in a drought that leaves us not indifferent with 1.89 billion dollars of economic damage. We are up to 175000 of people to had lost our housing,and 546 dead. According to the official record we saw 100% of our damaged crops to the hardest hit areas After the disaster A month after the angry victims complainded about the slow arrival of humanitarian aid A teenager has been shot and three people injured by an bullet during the humanitarian aid wich degenerated. J'espere ça vous viens en aide c'etais un peu difficile a cause des , et les . De comprendre le sens de la phrase mais tous va biens
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Cycyne
désolé j'en mettrais la prochaine fois , et merci beaucoup
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I am writing this letter to tell you first that I am fine, but also tell you the horrible disaster that happened at home in Haiti
It was in the beginning of October there was a cyclone named Matthew who devastated everything including my house.
The south of the country was ravaged by gusts of wind blowing at 250 kilometers per hour and torrential rains that made rivers and flooded our homes.
More Matthew to aggravate the effects of climatic phenomena in a drought that leaves us not indifferent with 1.89 billion dollars of economic damage we are to 175000 people to have lost our housing, 546