Je ne suis pas une pro mais je pense savoir ce qu’il faut mettre :

I can ate candies in the kitchen.

I was afraid to get an hour of detention.

I’d pretend I ate a toadstool.

Je pense que ce sont les bonnes phrases et je l’espere. Je te souhaite bonne chance pour ton poème.

Bonsoir !!

On Monday, I didn't go to school

I slept all day long and it was cool

I didn't want to get up

I am too young and I still have to grow up.

(on ne peut pas mette la dernière phrase au passé; c'est un fait ..)

On Tuesday, I stayed in my bed

My face was all red

I had drawn pimples with a red pen

I had "chicken pox" so I could eat candies in the kitchen.

(so like that = ça ne veut rien dire ...)

On Wednesday, it was raining dogs and cats

I didn't have any rain hats

I didn't want to be chased by the neighbor's dog

Not by a bull frog. (???)  ( si tu mets "be chase by"  tu dois remettre "by" ensuite ... = être pourchassée par )

On Thursday, I drew dark circles under my eyes

I knew this was all lies

My parents asked me why I looked so exhausted today

I told them I overstudied yesterday.

On Friday, I hadn't reviewed any lesson

I was afraid to get an hour detention

So Monday, no way to go back to school

I'd pretend I ate a toadstool.  (= I would pretend)

voilà.. je n'ai rien changé.. juste fait les quelques corrections de temps !!

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