Bonsoir, je dois faire un dialogue d'anglais, je l'ai présenté à mon prof et il m'a dit qu'il fallait faire attention au temps du passé, car je n'utilise pas le bon passé au bon moment, si vous pouviez m'aider, me corriger, ça serait sympa, Merci ^^
"My name is Carlos, I was born in Mexico and I grew with my parents, my brothers and my sisters. My parents gave me a low-quality violin because my parents worked as fruit-pickers and they were underpaid. We lived in a shack. I played violin in the street and some persons gave me money. I saved my money and I paid a high-quality violin, I was 12. I went into bars and I played violin, I earned a little money, but not enough to live. 7 years later, I played in a bar and an American saw me play. He gave me a chance to go in the Land of opportunity. I trained myself during 6 years in America. Now I have 28, I play in the Metropolitan Opera in New York City."
"My name is Carlos, I was born in Mexico and I grew with my parents, my brothers and my sisters. My parents gave me a low-quality violin because my parents worked as fruit-pickers and they were underpaid. We lived in a shack. I played violin in the street and some persons gave me money. I saved my money and I paid a high-quality violin, I was 12. I went into bars and I played violin, I earned a little money, but not enough to live. 7 years later, I played in a bar and an American saw me play. He gave me a chance to go in the Land of opportunity. I trained myself during 6 years in America. Now I have 28, I play in the Metropolitan Opera in New York City."
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My name is Carlos, I was burning in Mexico and I grew with my parents, my brothers and my sisters. My parents gave me a low-quality violin because they worked as fruit-pickers and they were underpaid. We lived in a shack. I was playing violin in the street and some persons gave me money. I saved my money and I paid a high-quality violin, I was 12. I went into bars and I played violin, I earned a little money, but not enough to live. 7 years later, I played in a bar and an American saw me play. He gave me a chance to go in the Land of opportunity. I trained myself during 6 years in America. Now I have 28, I play in the Metropolitan Opera in New York City.
Je ne parle pas très bien anglais mais si cela peut vous aider voici une petite aide pour en pas confondre les temps.
essayer de vous relire en vous posant les bonnes questions:
*Pour raconter des actions qui se suivent dans un récit, j'utilise le prétérite en -ed
* Pour faire une pause dans le récit et décrire ce que je voyais à ce moment-là, j'utilise le prétérite be+Ving