Bonsoir, je passe bientot mon oral de bac en anglais. Pouvez vous me le corrigez ? s'il vous plait. Je vous remercie d'avance.
I'm going to talk about the notion space and exchages. This notion deal with the geographical and symbolic deas that all society occupy and the interaction between men and differents societties. The different cultural,economic and language interactions have shapped and characterid our society
We will answer this question: How do immigrants manage to go to America?First, we will see why these people decide to leave their country. Secondly, let's talk about the course of their journey. Thirdly, we will talk about their insertion.
In the firt time, after seeing the documents "a boy journey" and "the golden door" we could deduce that immigrants come to America to escape poverty. They decide to leave their country to have a better future, a better life. Seymour the child of the document "A boy Journey" tells us that it is his family who decided to take him down so that he has better opportunities.After studying the picture of "Remember the dream" we see a family looking at the status of freedom.We understand that for them going to America is a dream. This is a place where they will be able to flourish.
In the second time the immigrants are transported in boats more documents "a boy journey" and "the golden door" tell us that this trip is uncomfortable. The conditions were bad.Before arriving in America, they had first to Ellis Island. Thanks to the document "the goldent door" we know what happens to them once they arrive in Ellis Island. We are told that once they get there very few are able to go to America because they have to go through many mental and physical exams first. If they do not succeed, they are sent home. They will also see a doctor to see if they have any infections and if they are not sick. After, they are questioned. After all this, immigrants can go to America, but we are told that very few succeed
Lately, after passing Ellis Island, immigrants are allowed to go to America. After studying many papers on Ellis Island we can say that their insertion into this new world is difficult. It's difficult because they do not know people. But for some, their insertion is easy, because they have family in America like for example Seymour who had an uncle who lived in America.
To conclude we can say that immigrants must go through Ellis Island before traveling to America. Many are afraid to go home. Once in Ellis Island they go to America but for some it will be difficult and for others not. We can say that this doccument illustrates this notion because here we are talking about geographical place. These people come from other countries like poland to come to America.
I'm going to talk about the notion space and exchages. This notion deal with the geographical and symbolic deas that all society occupy and the interaction between men and differents societties. The different cultural,economic and language interactions have shapped and characterid our society
We will answer this question: How do immigrants manage to go to America?First, we will see why these people decide to leave their country. Secondly, let's talk about the course of their journey. Thirdly, we will talk about their insertion.
In the firt time, after seeing the documents "a boy journey" and "the golden door" we could deduce that immigrants come to America to escape poverty. They decide to leave their country to have a better future, a better life. Seymour the child of the document "A boy Journey" tells us that it is his family who decided to take him down so that he has better opportunities.After studying the picture of "Remember the dream" we see a family looking at the status of freedom.We understand that for them going to America is a dream. This is a place where they will be able to flourish.
In the second time the immigrants are transported in boats more documents "a boy journey" and "the golden door" tell us that this trip is uncomfortable. The conditions were bad.Before arriving in America, they had first to Ellis Island. Thanks to the document "the goldent door" we know what happens to them once they arrive in Ellis Island. We are told that once they get there very few are able to go to America because they have to go through many mental and physical exams first. If they do not succeed, they are sent home. They will also see a doctor to see if they have any infections and if they are not sick. After, they are questioned. After all this, immigrants can go to America, but we are told that very few succeed
Lately, after passing Ellis Island, immigrants are allowed to go to America. After studying many papers on Ellis Island we can say that their insertion into this new world is difficult. It's difficult because they do not know people. But for some, their insertion is easy, because they have family in America like for example Seymour who had an uncle who lived in America.
To conclude we can say that immigrants must go through Ellis Island before traveling to America. Many are afraid to go home. Once in Ellis Island they go to America but for some it will be difficult and for others not. We can say that this doccument illustrates this notion because here we are talking about geographical place. These people come from other countries like poland to come to America.
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I'm going to talk about the notion space and exchanges. This notion deal with the geographical and symbolic deal that all society occupy and the interaction between men and different societies. The different cultural, economic and language interactions have shaped and character id our society
We will answer this question: How do immigrants manage to go to America? First, we will see why these people decide to leave their country. Secondly, let's talk about the course of their journey. Thirdly, we will talk about their insertion.
In the first time, after seeing the documents "a boy journey" and "the golden door" we could deduce that immigrants come to America to escape poverty. They decide to leave their country to have a better future, a better life. Seymour the child of the document "A boy Journey" tells us that it is his family who decided to take him down so that he has better opportunities. After studying the picture of "Remember the dream" we see a family looking at the status of freedom. We understand that for them going to America is a dream. This is a place where they will be able to flourish.
In the second time the immigrants are transported in boats more documents "a boy journey" and "the golden door" tell us that this trip is uncomfortable. The conditions were bad. Before arriving in America, they had first to Ellis Island. Thanks to the document "the Golden door" we know what happens to them once they arrive in Ellis Island. We are told that once they get there very few are able to go to America because they have to go through many mental and physical exams first. If they do not succeed, they are sent home. They will also see a doctor to see if they have any infections and if they are not sick. After, they are questioned. After all this, immigrants can go to America, but we are told that very few succeed
Lately, after passing Ellis Island, immigrants are allowed to go to America. After studying many papers on Ellis Island we can say that their insertion into this new world is difficult. It's difficult because they do not know people. But for some, their insertion is easy, because they have family in America like for example Seymour who had an uncle who lived in America.
To conclude we can say that immigrants must go through Ellis Island before traveling to America. Many are afraid to go home. Once in Ellis Island they go to America but for some it will be difficult and for others not. We can say that this document illustrates this notion because here we are talking about geographical place. These people come from other countries like Poland to come to America.
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