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Tom , 16 Yers old is a student and he practice football. Tom's father is called Roger, he is 44 years old and Roger is accountant. It's hobbies is fishing and bus cars.
Tom's Mother called Lois. She is 42 years old, Lois is Shopassistant. She loves reading.
Tom a one Brother and one Sister.
His father called John, he at 12 years old. He enjoys listenning music and Vidéo games.
Linda , 22 yeras old is tom's sister, she il Waitress in London. Linda hobbies is one dancing and shopping .
Voilà Merci Beaucoup !!
En m'expliquant si vous le souhaiter Merci !!
Tom , 16 Yers old is a student and he practice football. Tom's father is called Roger, he is 44 years old and Roger is accountant. It's hobbies is fishing and bus cars.
Tom's Mother called Lois. She is 42 years old, Lois is Shopassistant. She loves reading.
Tom a one Brother and one Sister.
His father called John, he at 12 years old. He enjoys listenning music and Vidéo games.
Linda , 22 yeras old is tom's sister, she il Waitress in London. Linda hobbies is one dancing and shopping .
Voilà Merci Beaucoup !!
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Tom is a sixteen years old student and he practises football (ou soccer). Roger, Tom's father, is 44 years old and he works as an accountant. His hobbies are fishing and "bus cars" (qu'estc e que t'as voulu dire ????). Tom's mother, Linda is a 42 years old shop assistant. She loves reading
Tom has got a brother and a sister. (encore Tom, t'es sûr que tu t'es pas planté ????!!!)
John, his father(brother) is 12 years old . he enjoys listening to music and playing video games.
Linda, Tom' sister is 22 years old. She works as a waitress in London. Her hobbies are dancing and shopping.
Bonne soirée :)
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Hello ! Voici la correction :Tom is a 16 year old student and pratices football.
Tom's father is called Roger, he is a 44 year old accountant. His hobby is fishing and he had a passion for buses and cars.
Tom's mother is called Lois, she is 42 years old and loves reading. Lois is also a shopassistant.
Tom has a brother and a sister.
His brother's name is John. He is 12 years old and enjoys listening to music and playing video games.
Tom's sister is 22 year old Linda who works as a waitress in London. Linda's hobbies include dancing and shopping.
Enfaite tes phrases étaient à la base assez bien structuré, il faut juste que tu fasse attention aux mots que tu utilise. Notamment les pronoms (par exemple les "her, him, she, his, hers...etc"). Tu oublie dès fois le verbe, mais à part ça, c'était franchement bien ;). J'espère que je t'ai aidé ! :D