Pour mon devoir d'anglais, je devais répondre à cette question : -How did this period of history change Europe and America?
Chose faite, mon tutorat me dit que ma réponse est juste mais me demande de mettre dans ma réponse les verbes :"is the source ..." it's also ...", who all focus ..." au prétérit (puisque nous sommes reparties au 18e siecle .) et de mettre aussi un déterminant devant" declaration" et "revolution".
Voici le texte :
A great intellectual and cultural development in Europe and the United States is the source of many discoveries, inventions and revolutions, for example: Declaration of Independence of the USA or French Revolution. It's also the time of philosophers - like Montesquieu, Voltaire, Jean-Jacques Rousseau, Diderot or d'Alembert - who all focus on the same subject: the questioning of political structures and traditional value systems such as religion, absolute monarchy, education, science
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dchenebeau
Is the source --- was the source The Declaration of Independance of the USA The French Revolution. It's also --- it was also who all focus --- who all focused. Et voila :)
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The Declaration of Independance of the USA
The French Revolution.
It's also --- it was also
who all focus --- who all focused.
Et voila :)