Bonsoir, pouvez-vous corriger les éventuelles erreurs de ce texte sur le réchauffement climatique svp ? Et est-ce compréhensible ? Le truc est basé sur un poster de la Reine des Neiges que j'ai fais:
We decided to talk about global warming.
We chose the Snow Queen as a character because she represents the cold and ice.
In this photo, she's on a beach where it's very hot. She is using her powers but instead of bringing ice out of her hands, liquid water comes out of it.
We want to show that temperatures have increased because of global warming. As a result, the ice is melting. If the climat doesn't change, we won't have ice again. So, instead of using hot water a long time, we can reduse our consumption and instead of taking our cars, we should take buses and riding bikes to preserv the climat of the planet. If we stop wasting and polluting, the Earth will be protected !
We decided to talk about global warming.
We chose the Snow Queen as a character because she represents the cold and ice.
In this photo, she's on a beach where it's very hot. She is using her powers but instead of bringing ice out of her hands, liquid water comes out of it.
We want to show that temperatures have increased because of global warming. As a result, the ice is melting. If the climat doesn't change, we won't have ice again. So, instead of using hot water a long time, we can reduse our consumption and instead of taking our cars, we should take buses and riding bikes to preserv the climat of the planet. If we stop wasting and polluting, the Earth will be protected !
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