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During the holidays,I visited my grandparents. Every time I go there, I went out with my little brother and we played football.  I am the one who wins every time because he is smaller than me, he is 4 years old. Then, I went to Venise in Italy to visit my family, It was the first time I went there, I liked that city so much,and it was nice but it was cold. When I returned to Paris, it was too cold. I went to the cinema with my friends,and I liked it because it was so fun. During the second week, I often went to Paris, I climbed the Eiffel Tower with my mother and my little sister and we could see everything over the Eiffel tower, it was magic and fabulous ! It was the second time I went there but the first time I went there I was very small, i was 3 years old so I didn't remember how nice it was !