Bonsoir, vous pouvez m’aider svp je dois raconter ce que j’ai fait pendant ses vacances de noël, je vous mets mon texte sauf que je le trouve court il faudrait que je rajoute des choses concernant le jour du nouvel an. Veuillez m’écrire des idées qui convienne à mon texte et pas courte. Merci d’avance.

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During my holidays, I went go to wedding with my parents and with my brother, it was boring. I visited my grandmother's where my uncle also lives and i visted two days, after his two days, it was new year our family gather at our house to celebrate, there were my two uncles and aunts with my cousins ​​and my aunt's brother but also my grandmother. We ate the evening meal together. It was good !. Last week I stayed at home and I finished my homework that i started the first week.