Bonjour j'ai besoin d'aide svp sur un dm d'anglais sur le crime et c'est la dernière note du 2eme trimestre et j'aimerais avoir une bonne note.
Voilà le sujet de mon DM : Write a story with this sentence " I was lying on the beach, when someone screamed ". ( 80-120 words) .
- Utilisez les outils ci-dessous ainsi que des mot de liaison : when-while-as-because
- marqueurs chronologique : first-after a while - later/eventually ( plus tard)
- faites un plan en utilisant le schéma ci-contre
- mobilisez le lexique et les structures adaptées a votre contexte
Voilà le sujet de mon DM : Write a story with this sentence " I was lying on the beach, when someone screamed ". ( 80-120 words) .
- Utilisez les outils ci-dessous ainsi que des mot de liaison : when-while-as-because
- marqueurs chronologique : first-after a while - later/eventually ( plus tard)
- faites un plan en utilisant le schéma ci-contre
- mobilisez le lexique et les structures adaptées a votre contexte
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BonjourI was lying on the beach when someone screamed. I stood up right away, looking towards the sea, thinking at first a kid could be drowning. But no, there wasn' t anyone in the sea. It was lunch time.
Then, I remembered that woman with blond hair lying down as well not so far from me. She wasn't there anymore but all her stuff were still there.
After a while, I started to search towards the dunes behind the beach. It was really hot. I went on and on and I finally found her, sitting on the sand , shaking and crying. I tried to ask her what was going on, if she was ok and she hardly lifted her arm as to show me a direction and she was whispering something I couldn't understand except "there", "there"....So I went that direction, and I saw lots of blood and a corpse.
She had been a little further to change her clothes and almost walked on it, because half the body was buried.
We went back to the beach, I really had to help her and I called immediately the police so that the corpse wouldn't be seen by anybody else.
Bon la plage, un crime, le nombre de mots doit y être, j'espère que ça le fera
bonne soirée :)