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EMPTY BARREL

They waking up at six o’clock
There is a people’s flock
But the brains are lock
They go to school
By dressing cool

Whereas others flock
have only
A few torn dreams
like a trophy

Can it be true
the things about you
Losing the day while building the future
Maybe we are just a few looter
So whisper quietly
and cry this inequatly

They guess there is silent
Because of them violent
but they don’t know: frivolous!
Empty barrel makes the most noises


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Merci d'avance :)