Hello je dois préparer un "punchy speech" ("discours poignant") en anglais pour défendre mon associa.... Pergunta de ideia de0Marine

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Hello je dois préparer un "punchy speech" ("discours poignant") en anglais pour défendre mon association qui lutte contre le travail des enfants dans le monde. Pourriez-vous m'aider à trouver des tournures et phrases pour mon discours ?
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Aumars

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Child labour is a difficult problem that exists for developing countries. There are multiple consequences that they must face, primarily physical injuries and lack of basic education.

The main cause of child labour is poverty as the family requires each member to work in order to survive.

Eliminating child labour is an important factor in becoming a developed and civilized nation.

Child labour is still prevalent in poor countries today.

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smartdiamond essaie de faire allusion au personne qui ont fait de grand discours comme martin luther king

0Marine Merci mais je l'ai fait avant d'attendre les réponses finalement

0Marine Millions of children around the world get up early to go to work. Even though child labor was abolished for a long time in our developed countries, we can’t ignore that it still exists in poorest ones. Furthermore, over half of them put themselves in danger by working in coalmines and can be injured even to death. Young children often work in hard conditions and are abused. Moreover, children can’t go to school and when they grow up they are not graduated so they can’t have a job.

0Marine As you can see child labor is a real serious social issue. Therefore, it must stop and you can be part of the fight by joining our organization and make a donation. Every penny counts. As a member of the organization, you can contribute to make a change and assure a good future to children around the world. One of our objectives is to put pressure on governments through big gatherings to make them react and stop child labor in their countries.

0Marine We also organize demonstrations against brands that abuse children. Nevertheless, our commitment is to offer them the possibility to go to school to extract them from this concerning situation. Unity makes strength, come and join us!

Aumars C'est un bien écrit discours ! Mais, il y a des petits erreurs. "we can’t ignore that it still exists in poor and developing nations" - "coal mines" - "can have fatal injuries" - "children can’t go to school and receive proper education in order to have a decent job and future" - "child labor is a serious social issue" - "it must be stopped" - "and sending donations" - "through large protests" - 'to go to school and rid this issue from our society"

0Marine Merci