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Describe the futur job you want to do.

" Dear Diary,
I want to tell you that for the first time of my life I’m sure of what I want to be. And I want to be an important person. I want to control, to have influence. I would like to work in business. A lot of people don’t want to work on a desk, but personally I don’t mind that. I want to give orders, to manage a team, to run the business. I want to make things move, I want to promote new innovation, to make it product. I really would like to be useful, to help technology to develop. I think about to work in environment business because I think that it’s a sector which deserves more attentions and also because it’s necessary. I’d love being a great business woman respected for her work. I want to change the world in my own way. We all can change world in our own way. If we believe in us. That’s my thought and I think that I can do it well if I work hard. "