bonjour. essaye de reformuler la phrase comme ceci:
My school uniform that I created is composed of blue trousers with white outlines like joggings,a jacket in white and blue stripes and a shirt with a blue collar and sleeves . The shirt and trousers are in cotton so they are comfortable, the jacket is waterproof so if it rains, the jacket can be an umbrella . The Js on the uniform is an abbreviation of Janson that gives a representation of the sky, energy ,vitality and adolescence. Girls and boys have the same uniform . I would like boys and girls to have the same rights , so , for me ,it can be an equal sign . I found skirts for girls aren't convenient because they cant have big movement and some boys can have bad thoughts .A jogging has an advantage, its the fact that you're not obligated to change your clothes for physical education and you can do big movements wothout being afraid of anything. Students can draw on the jackets to develop their creativity. School uniforms teaches pupils to be part of a team . This uniform isn't expensive because in adolescence, students grow up quickly , don't they? You can wear this uniform for a long time so you can be able to save money for a new uniform. Those uniforms clothes are wide so fatter people aren't scared of discrimination and wil be more confident.Therefore , this uniform may not be the prettiest, but it's the most useful ,isn't it ?
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bonjour. essaye de reformuler la phrase comme ceci:
My school uniform that I created is composed of blue trousers with white outlines like joggings,a jacket in white and blue stripes and a shirt with a blue collar and sleeves . The shirt and trousers are in cotton so they are comfortable, the jacket is waterproof so if it rains, the jacket can be an umbrella . The Js on the uniform is an abbreviation of Janson that gives a representation of the sky, energy ,vitality and adolescence. Girls and boys have the same uniform . I would like boys and girls to have the same rights , so , for me ,it can be an equal sign . I found skirts for girls aren't convenient because they cant have big movement and some boys can have bad thoughts .A jogging has an advantage, its the fact that you're not obligated to change your clothes for physical education and you can do big movements wothout being afraid of anything. Students can draw on the jackets to develop their creativity. School uniforms teaches pupils to be part of a team . This uniform isn't expensive because in adolescence, students grow up quickly , don't they? You can wear this uniform for a long time so you can be able to save money for a new uniform. Those uniforms clothes are wide so fatter people aren't scared of discrimination and wil be more confident.Therefore , this uniform may not be the prettiest, but it's the most useful ,isn't it ?