Bonjour, corriger ce texte avec les deux prétérits, la voix passive, look/looks like, les pronoms relatifs, les subordonnés de temps, les connecteurs logiques, le texte doit être ordonné avec des marqueurs temporels, et des connecteurs simples et complexes, sans oublier de corriger les fautes :

A long time ago, in a village of 442 inhabitants, where the villagers were at war because they did not share the same political ideas, a tragedy will occur and the legend still hangs over this small village... The villagers fought with firearms, bombs and knives to finish off their enemies, this little war left 100 injured and 28 dead but the consequences were terrible.

3 days after a seer predicted a mysterious creature would arise to drown those who did harm, but he was called 'crazy'

30 minutes later there was an earthquake and all the injured people were pushed into an empty, deserted field. When suddenly, a huge creature comes out of the ground. She was green in color with sharp black teeth, a fiery tail, very small horns with a body that looked like a whale and she came out of turquoise water that surrounded the entire field.

This creature took the villagers on its tail to burn them then plunged them into the water through which it emerged and then shouted "Your actions have consequences!" and returned to this lake.
Since that day, the creature has not returned and the bodies have never been found.

Merci d’avance !