Me ajude a corrigir meu texto, por favor só responda quem realmente sabe inglês.
Yesterday, I went to my friend's birthday partu, there, it was sunny, and I did many things. The party was at my friend's house, the party was great, but I didn't liked to do many friends because my best friend is jealous. I talked about sports and style music.
Yesterday, I went to my friend's birthday partu, there, it was sunny, and I did many things. The party was at my friend's house, the party was great, but I didn't liked to do many friends because my best friend is jealous. I talked about sports and style music.
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Yesterday, I went to my friend's birthday party. It was sunny and I did many things. The party was at his house and it was great. However, I didn't want (não é liked porque já usou o did e acho que ficaria melhor o want (querer)) to do many friends because my best friend is jealous. So, I talked about sports and music.
Opinião: tem algumas frases que parecem meio desligadas do texto como por exemplo "it was sunny" e "I talked about sports and music" Mas isso é questão de gosto pela estruturação.