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" The TransAsia Airways Flight 222 was a scheduled flight that crashed into buildings just before the landing on the 23th of July 2014.
The flight was scheduled to leave Kaohsiung at 16:00, but because of the bad weather it took off with 45 minutes of delay.
The plane made a first attempt of landing under a violent rainfall and on a wet runway but put back gases to represent itself, then asked at 7 pm a new permission to land. At that time, the commanders lost control of the engine.
The plane crashed in the canton of Huhsi, causing a fire involving two houses.
There were 58 passengers on board, including 4 children.
2 French citizens and 46 Taiwanese, including all crew members, died in the crash.
Fortunately, 10 people survived and managed to call their family.
There were immediately many reactions:
- The Taiwanese president Ma Ying-jeou ordered an immediate help for the families of the victims and an investigation.
- One minute of silence was observed by 19 international diplomats in Taiwan. "
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" The TransAsia Airways Flight 222 was a scheduled flight that crashed into buildings just before the landing on the 23th of July 2014.
The flight was scheduled to leave Kaohsiung at 16:00, but because of the bad weather it took off with 45 minutes of delay.
The plane made a first attempt of landing under a violent rainfall and on a wet runway but put back gases to represent itself, then asked at 7 pm a new permission to land. At that time, the commanders lost control of the engine.
The plane crashed in the canton of Huhsi, causing a fire involving two houses.
There were 58 passengers on board, including 4 children.
2 French citizens and 46 Taiwanese, including all crew members, died in the crash.
Fortunately, 10 people survived and managed to call their family.
There were immediately many reactions:
- The Taiwanese president Ma Ying-jeou ordered an immediate help for the families of the victims and an investigation.
- One minute of silence was observed by 19 international diplomats in Taiwan. "
+ Si vous avez une idée pour terminer l'oral de manière moins "brute", je suis preneuse!
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The flight was scheduled to leave Kaohsiung at 4 pm , but because of bad weather it took off with 45 minutes of delay.
The plane made a first attempt to land under a violent rainfall and on a wet runway but put back gases to represent itself(tu as voulu dire quoi ici?), then asked once againg, at 7 pm a new permission to land. At that time, the commanders lost control of the engine.
The plane crashed in the canton of Huhsi, causing a fire involving two houses.
There were 58 passengers on board, including 4 children.
2 French citizens and 46 Taiwanese, including all crew members, died in the crash.
Fortunately, 10 people survived and managed to call their family.
There were immediately many reactions:
- The Taiwanese president Ma Ying-jeou ordered an immediate help for the families of the victims and an investigation.
- One minute of silence was observed by 19 international diplomats in Taiwan. "