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When I saw our new home for the first time, I couldn't believe my eyes.
It was a big white house with a huge garden at the edge of a lake. In the garden there was a lot of plants and a fountain. From the outside the house seemed perfect. When I pushed the front door, I held my breath. I saw a gigantic living-room, white and bright.
I climbed the stairs and dicovered my bedroom. I didn't know what to say, she was magnificent !Bleu, with a big bed with a lot of pillows.
This house was perfect, a house made specially for me. I had realized my dream.
When I saw our new home for the first time, I couldn't believe my eyes.
It was a big white house with a huge garden at the edge of a lake. In the garden there was a lot of plants and a fountain. From the outside the house seemed perfect. When I pushed the front door, I held my breath. I saw a gigantic living-room, white and bright.
I climbed the stairs and dicovered my bedroom. I didn't know what to say, she was magnificent !Bleu, with a big bed with a lot of pillows.
This house was perfect, a house made specially for me. I had realized my dream.
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When I saw our new home for the first time, I couldn't believe it.
It was a big white house with a huge garden at the edge of a lake. In the garden there was a lot of plants and a fountain. From the outside the house seemed perfect. When I pushed the front door, I held my breath. I saw a gigantic living-room, white and bright.
I climbed the stairs and dicovered my bedroom. I didn't know what to say, it was magnificent !Blue, with a big bed with a lot of pillows.
This house was perfect, a house made aspecially for me. I realized my dream.