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ibanmarotel75

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HELP J'aurais besoin de qqn pour relire mon texte d'anglais et le corrige en mettant les fautes en évidence (gras ou couleur) J'ai toujours eu des dificultés en anglais et souhaite comprendre donc si l'on pouvait me corriger pour que je comprenne MERCI D'AVANCE LE TEXTE: In this account, I'm going to introduce to you my invention designed in partnership with an association of handicapped people, which I think she can change the life of some peoples. This idea came to me because I want help the handicapped peoples in her daily life. My invention is intended for people who are missing a leg or an arm. Its purpose would to give back mobility and independence at the persons concerned There are already solutions on the market, but often this prothesis are too much expensive, too much bulky, sparsely ergonomic. Today I propose an alternative at this, one prothesis with simple use, economic, feathery. She will be made with 100% of recycled materials and print in 3D which will reduce the cost of production. Made to measure and adaptable on request she will totally adapted to the patient and these needs. Ended the frequent visit at the prosthetist. Motorized and connect to a smartphone by an application simple and ergonomic, she will transmit at the patient all the data we need (wear, modes, battery level …) I think she can improve the daily of handicapped people by its practicality, its low cost and its minimalist conception. She has everything for seduce. With regard to the cost question, the price it will not exceed 1200£ (against 6000£ in average usually) because she will be designed in low cost materials, print in 3D, designed by engineers and programmer voluntarily team. The customer support held by volunteers concerned by the handicap remain at your disposal for more information’s
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Bonsoir, J'ai un niveau d'Anglais moyen ! Je souhaiterais donc une relecture de mon texte ci-dessous: - Si il y a des fautes pourriez vous faire en sorte de me les mettre en évidence (gras ou couleur) Je vous remercie par avance TEXTE: In this account, I'm going to introduce to you my invention designed in partnership with an association of handicapped people, which I think she can change the life of some peoples. My invention is intended for people who are missing a leg or an arm. Its purpose would to give back mobility and independence at the persons concerned There are already solutions on the market, but often this prothesis are too much expensive, too much bulky, sparsely ergonomic. Today I propose an alternative at this, one prothesis with simple use, economic, feathery. She will be made with 100% of recycled materials and print in 3D which will reduce the cost of production. Made to measure and adaptable on request she will totally adapted to the patient and these needs. Ended the frequent visit at the prosthetist. Motorized and connect to a smartphone by an application simple and ergonomic, she will transmit at the patient all the data we need (wear, modes, battery level …) I think she can improve the daily of handicapped people by its practicality, its low cost and its minimalist conception. She has everything for seduce. With regard to the cost question, the price it will not exceed 1200£ (against 6000£ in average usually) because she will be designed in low cost materials, print in 3D, designed voluntarily by engineers and programmer team. The customer support held by volunteers concerned by the handicap rremain at your disposal for more information’s
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J'aurais bien besoin de votre aide.Je ne comprends pas mon exo. Si qqn voudrais bien me le faire étape par étape cela m'aiderait beaucoup a comprendreCordialement
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Bonjour, J'ai besoin d'aide Je ne comprends pas cette exercice de maths. Si qqn pourrais le résoudre étape par étape je serais ravis. Cela m'aiderais a mieux comprendre. Bien à vous
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