Si quelqu'un de bon en espagnol pourrait me corriger les fautes (sauf les accents) et la tournure des phrases, ce serait vraiment super! merci beaucoup :-)

Je n'ai pas mis tous les accents par contre donc inutile de me les corriger

 

La nocion que voy a tratar es el turismo. Presentaré esta nocion para mostrar "Como se desarolla el turismo en Espana?" Primero mostraré como se manifiesta el turismo en Espana y en una segunda parte, explicaré las ventajas y las desventajas.

La mayoria de los turistas van a Cataluna, a las Islas Baleares, a las Canarias.

El chiringuito mostra que la gastronomia es un razon para que los turistas van a espana. Hay tambien la playa, los monumantos, los museos como El Prado, las fiestas locales, el clima, los paisajes diversificados y el turismo de compras.

Ibiza es una isla de paradojas porque hay la fiesta pero tambien los paisajes. Ibiza participa a la riqueza economica que es una ventaja del turismo. El intercambio cultural, la creacion de empleo o la modernizacion del pais son tambien ventajas.

"Mi verano en ibiza" traduce las desvantajas del turismo en Espana: el marido dice que las playas estan llenas de basura, que el agua esta contaminada, que hay la capa de ozona a causa de la contaminacion. Dice tambien que las discotecas estan abarrotadas, que los restaurantes son caros, el trafico impossible. El turismo acarrea una perdida de identidad, el turismo de borrachera provoca una imagen negativa.  

El turimo esta muy presente en espana. Podemos preguntarnos si el turismo no esta demasiado presente en espana.

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