Bonjour/Bonsoir !☺
J'ai un devoir d'Anglais (une lettre à écrire à la reine Victoria sur les mauvaises conditions de vie dans l'East End) donc j'ai écris la lettre mais vu mon niveau en Anglais je me suis pas mal aidée de google traduction à certaines lignes. donc si il y a un/une pro en Anglais ici, qui aura la gentillesse de m'aider, je suis preneuse à 100% ☺
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Merci d'avance ! ♥
voici la lettre que j'ai écris :
Dear Majesty,
The situation in the East End has been getting worse. The East Enders are living in terrible conditions and we fear the worst.
The crime rate has been stunning, the children are exploited, and the families live in slums.
Children die from severe diseases such as chicken pox, measles and plague.
The people of the East End are tired of these conditions and we invite you to react before it gets worse.
We ask more of security to ensure the protection of every inhabitants.
The police officiers need of patrol as often in order to prevent crime.
We would like you to send more doctors to the East End to cure serious diseases and prevent all epidemic.
We also ask you to build decent houses to accommodate families in need and also to renovate all existing homes in the East End.
Could you also carry out a law against labor of childrens and their exploitation.
This procedure is necessary and will stop violence in East End and prevent major unrest that could threaten other London neighborhoods
We trust you to develop a solution to all the problems mentioned above and we remain at your disposal to talk.
Genially
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J'ai un devoir d'Anglais (une lettre à écrire à la reine Victoria sur les mauvaises conditions de vie dans l'East End) donc j'ai écris la lettre mais vu mon niveau en Anglais je me suis pas mal aidée de google traduction à certaines lignes. donc si il y a un/une pro en Anglais ici, qui aura la gentillesse de m'aider, je suis preneuse à 100% ☺
***JE NE VEUX PAS D'AIDE PROVENANT DE GOOGLE TRADUCTION, PUIS-CE QUE J'EN SORS ET QUE JE NE SUIS PAS SATISFAITE***
Merci d'avance ! ♥
voici la lettre que j'ai écris :
Dear Majesty,
The situation in the East End has been getting worse. The East Enders are living in terrible conditions and we fear the worst.
The crime rate has been stunning, the children are exploited, and the families live in slums.
Children die from severe diseases such as chicken pox, measles and plague.
The people of the East End are tired of these conditions and we invite you to react before it gets worse.
We ask more of security to ensure the protection of every inhabitants.
The police officiers need of patrol as often in order to prevent crime.
We would like you to send more doctors to the East End to cure serious diseases and prevent all epidemic.
We also ask you to build decent houses to accommodate families in need and also to renovate all existing homes in the East End.
Could you also carry out a law against labor of childrens and their exploitation.
This procedure is necessary and will stop violence in East End and prevent major unrest that could threaten other London neighborhoods
We trust you to develop a solution to all the problems mentioned above and we remain at your disposal to talk.
Genially
...
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Dear Majesty,
The situation in the East End has been getting worse. The people are living in terrible conditions and we fear the worst.
The crime rate has been stunning, the children are exploited, and the families live in slums.
Children die from severe diseases such as chicken pox, measles and plague.
The people of the East End are tired of these conditions and we invite you to react before it gets worse.
We ask more of security to ensure the protection of every inhabitants.
The police officers need of patrol as often in order to prevent crime.
We would from you to send more doctors to this region to cure serious diseases and prevent all epidemic.
We also ask you to build decent houses to accommodate families in need and also to renovate all existing homes in the East End.
Could you also announce a law against labor for children and their exploitation.
This procedure is necessary and will stop violence in East End and prevent major unrest that could threaten other London regions.
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