When I was little, I and my parents made a trip by car, we traveled France to go to Spain, and during this trip I had a notebook on board. Today is July 17th, 2011, and I am excited to discover the city and the activities. First we went to the sea, there were a lot of people and the sea was huge!, I had never seen so many people in one place, it was very hot and I rushed into the sea It was the first time that I was swimming alone in a foreign country, it was incredible. Secondly, we had gone swimming with dolphins, in the past I had never seen dolphins in real life, I had a lot scared but when I caught on to the dolphins, it was a dream come true, I felt like I was flying. Then we went to a Spanish restaurant which was very beautiful, I had to eat a delicious dish, it was a wonderful moment with my parents. Finally, in the evening around 22h, we went outside and we had to visit the city, where my father bought me a bracelet that I really liked, and then we went back to the hotel.
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Little ne se dit pas on dit plutôt « younger » qui veut dire plus jeune ou alors « kid » ou encore «A little child » ensuite on ne dit pas I mais « me and my parents » tu veux dire traverser pour traveled ?? Dans ce cas là dit plutôt we cross France to go to spain Dire que la mer est « huge » n’est pas très correct remplace par un adjectif style « incredible » ou « breathtaking »(a couper le souffle) Dit plutôt THEN que secondly Had gone n’est pas la bonne conjugaison pour had gone swimming with dolphins!! Utilise plutôt went (we went swimming) Dis I have eaten car i had to eat n’est pas correct (ça voudrait dire que tu as été obligé de manger un délicieux plat) Les anglais ne disent pas 22 heures. Dis plutôt at about 10 PM Ne dis pas we had to visit (ca voudrait dire que tu as été obligé de visiter) dis plutôt we visited Dis that i love au lieu de that i reall’y liked (car ça suppose que tu l’as aimé que sur le moment or je pense que tu l’aimes tjrs)
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tu veux dire traverser pour traveled ?? Dans ce cas là dit plutôt we cross France to go to spain
Dire que la mer est « huge » n’est pas très correct remplace par un adjectif style « incredible » ou « breathtaking »(a couper le souffle)
Dit plutôt THEN que secondly
Had gone n’est pas la bonne conjugaison pour had gone swimming with dolphins!! Utilise plutôt went (we went swimming)
Dis I have eaten car i had to eat n’est pas correct (ça voudrait dire que tu as été obligé de manger un délicieux plat)
Les anglais ne disent pas 22 heures. Dis plutôt at about 10 PM
Ne dis pas we had to visit (ca voudrait dire que tu as été obligé de visiter) dis plutôt we visited
Dis that i love au lieu de that i reall’y liked (car ça suppose que tu l’as aimé que sur le moment or je pense que tu l’aimes tjrs)