Bonjour à tous,
Je dois crée un poster qui doit sensibiliser les personnes sur leurs habitudes de consommation. Notre devoir sera affiché dans notre salle d'anglais, et j'aimerai pas qu'il y est des fautes d'orthographe sur mon affiche car cela ne sera pas beau. Donc pourriez-vous me corriger ?
Voici les phrases que j'ai rédigé :
- If you want to save the planet of the pollution and to have a better health, then change your habits and listen to our advice!
- Why don’t to change our bad habits on the consumption of the water by taking a shower, rather than a bath to the everyday life!
- We always say that to take care of the planet, it also is to take care of oneself, then why not to replace its habits of transport by:
The ride sharing, The public transportation,Taxis, The bike.
- Don't throw out any more objects which you don't use any more, now make place in the recycling!
- How to reduce the consumption of electricity to the house? By installing for example energy-saving bulbs and solar panels.
- But especially, by switching off the lights!
- If I were you, I would change my food habits by creating a garden Bio and Spray your plantation thanks to the rainwater.
- On the other hand don’t use pesticide.
Pourriez-vous m'aider ?
Merci infiniment pour votre aide !
Je dois crée un poster qui doit sensibiliser les personnes sur leurs habitudes de consommation. Notre devoir sera affiché dans notre salle d'anglais, et j'aimerai pas qu'il y est des fautes d'orthographe sur mon affiche car cela ne sera pas beau. Donc pourriez-vous me corriger ?
Voici les phrases que j'ai rédigé :
- If you want to save the planet of the pollution and to have a better health, then change your habits and listen to our advice!
- Why don’t to change our bad habits on the consumption of the water by taking a shower, rather than a bath to the everyday life!
- We always say that to take care of the planet, it also is to take care of oneself, then why not to replace its habits of transport by:
The ride sharing, The public transportation,Taxis, The bike.
- Don't throw out any more objects which you don't use any more, now make place in the recycling!
- How to reduce the consumption of electricity to the house? By installing for example energy-saving bulbs and solar panels.
- But especially, by switching off the lights!
- If I were you, I would change my food habits by creating a garden Bio and Spray your plantation thanks to the rainwater.
- On the other hand don’t use pesticide.
Pourriez-vous m'aider ?
Merci infiniment pour votre aide !
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1ère phrase : j’enlèverais le "to" après le "and", et comme il y a plusieurs conseils, ajouter un s à advice -> advices ?
2ème : Je dirais plutot "We often say that taking care of the planet is also taking care of oneself...
3ème : Deux anymore à la suite font un peu bizarre, et la deuxième partie de la phrase aussi, plutot comme ça ?
-> Stop throwing out objects which you don't use any more, now make place to recycling !
4ème : How to reduce electricity consumption at home ? By..
5ème : J'enlèverais juste la virgule qui n'est pas très utile
6ème : ..by creating an organic garden and letting the rain water your plants. (Je suppose que c'est ce que tu veux dire par "spray" ?)
7ème : On the other hand ne s'utilise que si tu as mis un "On the one hand" avant, donc là peut-être le remplacer par un "And also" ou quelque chose d'autre..
Voila !