Bonjour est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait corriger mon paragraphe en anglais merci beaucoup d'avance.
It was Wednesday the 8th 1905, me and my compagnion went in a forest to build a hut but quickly mist surrounded us and I lost companion and I was all alone in a forest I didn't even know. Suddenly, I heard a noise so I turned around but nothing was there, further I heard branches cracking and I turned around and there it was, a grizzly bear was right behind me I panicked and started shouting and running in the woods but it followed me everywhere. So there I was face to face with a grizzly bear ready to eat me alive when suddenly a ball smashed its face, my companion heard me shouting and came to my rescue, after that we went back home and relaxed.
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La seul faute que tu a fait est au lieu de "I lost companion", c'est "I lost my companion"
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