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Est-ce que vous pourriez vérifier le texte, le traduire et corriger les fautes s’il vous plaît. Je dois tenir 3 minutes à l’oral donc si vous avez des choses à rajouter ALLEZ Y ! :)
My name is Joe Rot.
I was born the 22 October 1990 in New York. I has an very difficult (enfance ?) I lost my mother when I has 4 years old and my dad was in an hospital. I decided to went in Australian because I dreamed about became a cricket player.
I am an australian criketer and current the captain of the Australian cricket team. I am the first criketer who be selected for a national team without experience in first class cricket. I started my professional career in 2009 in New South Waves Team. With this team We won lot of trophies. We are the champions of Australia. In June 2012 I went in England and I went in the National England team. But we not won any price and I left the team in 2014 for return in Australia. And since 2014 I am in the national Australian team and we win a World Cup Of cricket !
I am married with Asuna since 2010. I have two kids one girl of 2 years, named Lucie. And a boy of 4 years, named Ippo.
But there is a problem, there are so many animals who killed for their ( fourrure, défense, manger).
In Asia, 14 000 bears are lock in small cage for 10 years and they are exploited for their bile. This bile was use to the Chinese medecine. Bears try to kill theirself. Also there an artificial MÉDICAMENTS ET QU’AU LIEU DE L’UTILISER ILS CONTINUENT À FAIRE SOUFFRIR ET TUER DES OURS ( je sais pas le dire en anglais xD).
I created the DEFENDER OF ANIMALS LIFE an association who help the animals in danger. My association go in lot of country for delivered animals who are exploited. All month I give 2 millions dollars for the association it’s hard but my cricket team help me and they give money like me.
Est-ce que vous pourriez vérifier le texte, le traduire et corriger les fautes s’il vous plaît. Je dois tenir 3 minutes à l’oral donc si vous avez des choses à rajouter ALLEZ Y ! :)
My name is Joe Rot.
I was born the 22 October 1990 in New York. I has an very difficult (enfance ?) I lost my mother when I has 4 years old and my dad was in an hospital. I decided to went in Australian because I dreamed about became a cricket player.
I am an australian criketer and current the captain of the Australian cricket team. I am the first criketer who be selected for a national team without experience in first class cricket. I started my professional career in 2009 in New South Waves Team. With this team We won lot of trophies. We are the champions of Australia. In June 2012 I went in England and I went in the National England team. But we not won any price and I left the team in 2014 for return in Australia. And since 2014 I am in the national Australian team and we win a World Cup Of cricket !
I am married with Asuna since 2010. I have two kids one girl of 2 years, named Lucie. And a boy of 4 years, named Ippo.
But there is a problem, there are so many animals who killed for their ( fourrure, défense, manger).
In Asia, 14 000 bears are lock in small cage for 10 years and they are exploited for their bile. This bile was use to the Chinese medecine. Bears try to kill theirself. Also there an artificial MÉDICAMENTS ET QU’AU LIEU DE L’UTILISER ILS CONTINUENT À FAIRE SOUFFRIR ET TUER DES OURS ( je sais pas le dire en anglais xD).
I created the DEFENDER OF ANIMALS LIFE an association who help the animals in danger. My association go in lot of country for delivered animals who are exploited. All month I give 2 millions dollars for the association it’s hard but my cricket team help me and they give money like me.
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"My name is Joe Rot. I was born ON the 22nd of October, 1990, in New York. I HAD a very difficult CHILDHOOD. I lost my mother when I was 4 years old and my dad was in THE hospital. I decided to GO TO Australia because I dreamed about BECOMING a cricket player.
I am an Australian CRICKET PLAYER and currentLY the captain of the Australian cricket team. I am the first CRICKET PLAYER who HAS BEEN selected for a national team without experience in first class cricket. I started my professional career in 2009 in New South Waves Team. We won A lot of trophies. We are champions in Australia. In June 2012 I went TO England and I JOINED the National England team. But we DID not WIN any price and I left the team in 2014 TO return TO Australia. And since 2014 I am in the national Australian team and we wOn a World Cup Of cricket !
In 2010, I married Asuna. We have two kids: A 2 year old girl named Lucie, and a boy who is 4 years old, named Ippo.
But there is a problem, there are so many animals who ARE killed for their ( fourrure, défense, manger). ici j'ai pas trop compris... mais fourrure =fur, défense=defense et manger=eat.
In Asia, 14 000 bears WERE lockED in A small cage for 10 years and they WERE exploited for their bile. This bile was useD FOR the Chinese medicine. The bears trIED to kill theirseLVES.
Also they already have artificial drugs and instead of using them, they continue hurting and killing bears.
I created the DEFENDER OF ANIMALS LIFE, an association who helpS the animals WHO ARE in danger. My association goEs in A lot of countrIES TO RELEASE animals who are exploited. All month I gAve 2 millions OF dollars for the association. It’s hard but my cricket team helpS me and they give money like me."
Voilà j'espère que c'est bon. Plutôt pas mal ton texte.