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Je voudrais savoir si quelqu’un pourrais m’aider à corriger ce texte en anglais c’est une comparaison entre deux personnes:
Amy and the boy are teenagers. Amy is shy and she never get a boyfriend while the boy get a girlfriend but he splitting up with her. Amy is overweight and a compulsive eater, also het mother obliged her to go on a rafting trip. She want her daughter to feel well and Amy is always stay at home. Contrary to Amy, the boy was upset and helpless after he lost her girlfriend, all this reasons made him leave England. He want to traveling for forget his problem. The plane in which he board have a bad flight conditions but when the plane is airborne he already forget his problem. Like Amy after some days in the rafting trip she had completely change, she ran after the rapids, and she loves the landscape.
Merci d’avance !
Je voudrais savoir si quelqu’un pourrais m’aider à corriger ce texte en anglais c’est une comparaison entre deux personnes:
Amy and the boy are teenagers. Amy is shy and she never get a boyfriend while the boy get a girlfriend but he splitting up with her. Amy is overweight and a compulsive eater, also het mother obliged her to go on a rafting trip. She want her daughter to feel well and Amy is always stay at home. Contrary to Amy, the boy was upset and helpless after he lost her girlfriend, all this reasons made him leave England. He want to traveling for forget his problem. The plane in which he board have a bad flight conditions but when the plane is airborne he already forget his problem. Like Amy after some days in the rafting trip she had completely change, she ran after the rapids, and she loves the landscape.
Merci d’avance !
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Amy and the boy are teenagers. Amy is shy and she never has a boyfriend while the boy has a girlfriend but he separates from her. Amy is overweight and is a compulsive eater. Her mother also forced her to go rafting. She wants her daughter to feel good and Amy always stays at home. Unlike Amy, the boy was upset and helpless after the loss of his girlfriend, all of which made her leave England. He wants to travel to forget his problem. The plane in which he climbs has bad flying conditions, but when the plane is flying, already forgets his problem. Like Amy after a few days of rafting, she had completely changed, she was running after the rapids and she loved the scenery. NICE short text LOVE IT !