Bonjour, j'ai un dm en anglais bien sûr je ne demande pas à ce qu'on me le fasse seulement me le corriger il s'agit d'écrire la suite d'un texte. ci joint la suite que j'ai rédigé. Merci d'avance à la personne qui me répondras'il y a besoin d'une photo plus claire il n'y a pas de soucis j'en renverrai une
My desire to help homeless (pas d’article The car tu parles des sans abris en règle général mais si tu dis les sans abris de ma ville ou autre on met the )
made me slightly forgot my fear. I got into my car. ………
Those are the worst ( ceux- là sont les pires)
They do not have good relationship with law enforcement
Would’nt attrack any attention
But I remembered my Lexus car which (objet : who c pour les personnes)
- What did you say? ( ou what do you say?) Upset Mordecai
Butter, both slices of bread ( pas d’article )
Then put into the sandwich two slices of cheddar cheese
ordered Mordecai to me (plus approprié que ordained)
He was speaking ( spooking ??) to me like a little child
I watched around me while I was making sandwishes
Or at least,I felt a little helpful
A crowd of people was waitingpatiently
1 votes Thanks 1
didijam
thank youuu very much! mais je ne comprends pourquoi avoir enlevé le "I was" dans la phrase : He was speaking to me like (I was) a little child
meemameema
tu peux le laisser aussi si tu veux les 2 se disent
Lista de comentários
My desire to help homeless (pas d’article The car tu parles des sans abris en règle général mais si tu dis les sans abris de ma ville ou autre on met the )
made me slightly forgot my fear. I got into my car. ………
Those are the worst ( ceux- là sont les pires)
They do not have good relationship with law enforcement
Would’nt attrack any attention
But I remembered my Lexus car which (objet : who c pour les personnes)
- What did you say? ( ou what do you say?) Upset Mordecai
Butter, both slices of bread ( pas d’article )
Then put into the sandwich two slices of cheddar cheese
ordered Mordecai to me (plus approprié que ordained)
He was speaking ( spooking ??) to me like a little child
I watched around me while I was making sandwishes
Or at least,I felt a little helpful
A crowd of people was waiting patiently