Bonjour, j'aurais besoin d'aide pour corriger mes fautes pour mon oral en anglais svp :)

I will talk about places and forms of power. First of all, I would like to give a definition of this notion. This notion deals with geographical and symbolic spaces, as well as interactions between men and different societies. The different spaces of the world are today more and more connected to each other, so that crossing the borders has become easier and faster. We will therefore be interested in the gap year which is a period of time during which a student takes a break from studying after they have finished school and before they start college or university. . Why nowadays students should take a gap year? We will see why students take a gap year and how to take a gap year is interesting for them.


Nowadays, students always travel for the same reasons thanks to the European exchange programs or the Erasmus program that we saw in class, this program allows young students to take a gap year free of charge. The raisons for which students often take a gap year are because of some major problems like the fact that they have trouble finding a place at the university or even that they can not get into the schools that they wish. They are competing to join the school they have chosen. That's why they prefer to take a gap year. But still, some take a year sabbatical to be able to relax before the exams and thus to discover the outside world and to acquire new experience. We will now see the benefits of taking a sabbatical year.

The sabbatical year makes students more mature and responsible. It also allows you to discover and learn new customs, meet new people and participate in new activities. Students can also learn to know themselves better. But still, it also helps to master one or more foreign languages ​​that will be an advantage later in the professional life. However there are also several disadvantages in a sabbatical year. Like road accidents or sexual harassment especially for young girls. But still, some students think that the sabbatical year is a holiday and they spend their time on the beaches. They forget that they are volunteer workers and that they are there to help people in difficulty like Africans or Inuit.


To conclude, the gap year is an opportunity that students take because they have no choice either to take a break from their study. This sabbatical year taken by young students allows them to acquire new knowledge and therefore be better when they resume their studies. For me, the gap year is really a good opportunity to learn new things and become more mature to have a better perspective of our future life.