Bonjour! J'aurais besoin d'aide pour me corriger mon texte en anglais s'il vous plaît, la scène se déroule au présent. La voici :
He tries to open the door of his bedroom with a hairpin, he unloked her. Then, he tries to open the main door but it's locked. He comes later in the living room and he sees a phone, he is exited and he hopes can call the police, he thinks that the end of the nightmare. He dials the numer but he don't hear the tone, he turns over the phone and he sees hat is empty. He is very dejects and he insults her. With his wheelch chair, he hits a table and a ceramic penguin falls in the floor but he catches up at time, he remplaces the penguin in the wrong face. After, he discovers a closet who he steals painkillers. Finally, he arrives in the kitchen, he crawls to the door for tries to oprn's her but it's locked. He hears Annie's car, and he rushes to return to his bedroom.
Merci beaucoup !!
He tries to open the door of his bedroom with a hairpin, he unloked her. Then, he tries to open the main door but it's locked. He comes later in the living room and he sees a phone, he is exited and he hopes can call the police, he thinks that the end of the nightmare. He dials the numer but he don't hear the tone, he turns over the phone and he sees hat is empty. He is very dejects and he insults her. With his wheelch chair, he hits a table and a ceramic penguin falls in the floor but he catches up at time, he remplaces the penguin in the wrong face. After, he discovers a closet who he steals painkillers. Finally, he arrives in the kitchen, he crawls to the door for tries to oprn's her but it's locked. He hears Annie's car, and he rushes to return to his bedroom.
Merci beaucoup !!
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BonjourHe tries to open the door of his bedroom with an hairpin, unlocks it. Then he tries to open the maindoor but it's locked. Afterwards, he goes in the livingroom and sees a phone. He is excited and hopes he can call the police. He thinks it's the end of the nightmare. He dials the number but doesn't hear any tone.He turns the phone over and sees he's empty. He is very dejected (c'est un mot qu'elle vous a donné ? sinon tu peux dire disgusted) and insults her . With his wheel chair he hits a table and a ceramic penguin falls on the floor but he catches it on time. He puts it back but on the wrong side. Next, he discovers a closet (cupboard) where he steals painkillers (c'est votre prof qui vous a donnés ce mot ?) sinon medicines ou drugs). Finally he gets in the kitchen, crawls to the door to open it but it's locked. He hears Annie's car, and rushes back to his room.
voilà. Il se peut qu'il y ait des mots que la prof vous a données alors prends les siens bien sûr.
En fait il y avait beaucoup de fautes de frappe et c'est pour ça que je ne comprenais rien. Et tu avais oublié pas mal de "s" 3eme pers singulier
bonne journée :)