Bonjour ! J’aurais besoin que l’on me dise s’il y a des fautes d’anglais dans ce texte :
First, Nelson Mandela was born in 1918 and he died in 2013 in South Africa. he wasn’t poor because he came from a royal family. He was orphan very young and he is the first in his family to go to school. He studied law in university.
Then, he vacance famous because he fought against racial segregation. He was a great man because he has forbidden the apartheid which consisted in separate black people and white people. They didn’t have same rights. Furthermore, Mandela sad a special dinner because he struggled without violence. He did that because Gandhi was his inspiration: he too fought like that. However, all his actions were the cause of his detention. He passed 27 years in prison. This hero received the Nobel Peace Price to congratulate him to all his actions. He the first South African president with dark skin.
Afterwards, everybody knows Nelson Mandela because he is a model of peace and freedom for all the humanity. He is the most persistent man ever. He was determined to reach his aim and transform attitudes. He is a mythic people because there is a statue of him in Johannesburg.
Bonjour, il y’a une faute après le Then, la faute est he vacance donc à la place de vacance écrit he became et la 2ème faute est Mandela sad a special dinner, cela ne veut rien dire est ce que tu pourrai me dire ce que tu voulais dire par la ? Sinon je ne vois aucune faute
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Bonjour, il y’a une faute après le Then, la faute est he vacance donc à la place de vacance écrit he became et la 2ème faute est Mandela sad a special dinner, cela ne veut rien dire est ce que tu pourrai me dire ce que tu voulais dire par la ? Sinon je ne vois aucune faute