Bonjour, je dois préparer des oraux d'Anglais pour le bac, pourriez-vous me le corriger s'il-vous-plaît, au niveau de la langue (et si possible le contenu c'est à dire la structure, la cohérence, etc). Voir le fichier Word en pièce jointe
J'ai aussi mis en pièce jointe la grille d'évaluation officielle de l'oral, en format pdf (voir page 6).
Merci d'avance
J'ai aussi mis en pièce jointe la grille d'évaluation officielle de l'oral, en format pdf (voir page 6).
Merci d'avance
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*it takes time for people to accept and integrate into change
*however for the last few decades some people have started to question this progress
*and especially the way to properly adapt into progress
*so, we might find ourselves wondering
*i will concentrate on the aspect of progress from a social point of view, starting from the early twentieth century, to more recent times
*in the USA
*oral comprehension titles “..”
*it was common to see children under the age of 10 working
*those groups went on strike which turned into violent rebellion
*surely enough the government often deployed...
*and the National Guard
*Later a law allowed unions...demand legislation? (J’ai pas compris)
*Unions, over the years
* around the same time period in England
*to fight to allow maried women
*later she became a member
*public opinion was afraid? (J’ai pas compris... peut-être vous pouvez dire...
-the members struck fear into the eyes of the public
*at the Derby as a form of protest to the government’s failure
*the government allowed women over the age of 30 to vote
*women’s rights
*its a way to achieve gender equality, it’s not entirely run by women, it also involves men in this common rights issue
*and also encouraging people to get involved
*to types of fights for rights
* strikes and rebellions
*and to try to change things faster than trying to make people aware of a social issue by just speaking (j’ai fait une autre phrase pour vous... je sais pas si vous aimez) -people usually turn to protesting or going on strike when they feel like their voices are not heard, basically they choose a more physical or sometimes violent way of expressing their feelings.
*people can be afraid of certain consequences, and will choose to not support your cause, and those who are involved in this fight risk getting injured or killed
*while using a specific approach to communicate will be a lot of hard work, but most likely won’t cause much damage (on parle pas de l’océan;) )
Désolé j’ai pas lu la 2 eme partie(
Mais si non vore rapport est très intéressant et très bien fait à mon avis clap clap*