Bonjour je voudrais savoir si mon texte est juste : Today at school we had a visit from a man who brought us books so that we could study. he could be that without him the school closes. He told us that in his country people took him for a fool to go far. But he felt he had to do something for us. He wanted to denounce poverty in our country. He decided he would build libraries instead of his manager business. Thanks to his money he helped us.
en francais : Aujourd'hui à l'école nous avons eu la visite d'un homme qui nous a apporté des livres pour que l'on puisse étudier . Il se pourrait que sans lui l'école ferme... Il nous a raconté que dans son pays les personnes l'ont pris pour un fou de partir loin . Mais il sentait qu'il devait faire quelque chose pour nous . Il voulait dénoncer la pauvreté dans notre pays. Il décida qu'il construirait des bibliothèques au lieu de faire son métier de directeur d'agence . Grace à son argent il nous a aidé .
merci davance ;
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ballydugan
At school we had a visitor who brought us books so that we could study. It is possible, that without his help our school would have closed. He told us that in his country people took him for a fool to go so far away to help people. But he felt that he had to do something for us. He wanted to condemn poverty in our country. He decided that he would build libraries instead of being a director in his company. Thanks to his money he was able to help us.
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manon432
et tu sur de toi ? je nai pas compris pourquoi au début on ne met pas today ??? merci,
ballydugan
Oui je suis sur! Tu pourrais laisser Today si tu veux... j'avait enlevé par rapport à l'h.
manon432
Merci peut tu me dire ou sont les faute alors stp ?
ballydugan
Tom86 - Really where? I would have written this entirely differently, but... Mais pour un non-bilingue je trouve le niveau pas mal.
manon432
merci et un question es que jai bien enployer le prétérit ? car je texte devait etre au preterit
manon432
At school we had a visitor who brought us books so that we could study.
It is possible, that without his help our school would have closed.
He told us that in his country people took him for a fool to go so far away to help people.
But he felt that he had to do something for us.
He wanted to condemn poverty in our country.
He decided that he would build libraries instead of being a director in his company.
Thanks to his money he was able to help us.
manon432
ce texte vien d'une autre personne qui ma corriger les faute et-il mieu que le mien ? merci
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It is possible, that without his help our school would have closed.
He told us that in his country people took him for a fool to go so far away to help people.
But he felt that he had to do something for us.
He wanted to condemn poverty in our country.
He decided that he would build libraries instead of being a director in his company.
Thanks to his money he was able to help us.