Bonjour , pouvais vous m'aider ? J'ai besoin de quelqu'un d'assez fort en Anglais , j'ai mon texte et j'ai besoin que vous me dite si les toute les informations ci dessous sont bien dans mon texte :
- Donner des informations sur le crime commis en utilisant le prétérit simple
- Expliquer le travail de la police en utilisant la voix passive au passé
- Raconter comment le criminel a été arrêté en utilisant le prétérit BE + V-ing
Voici le texte :
Yesterday afternoon, the New York court handed down its verdict: The murderer of Ashley Johnson, the famous heiress of "Johnson" perfumes, was sentenced to life imprisonment.
The facts date back to last December, at the victim's birthday party.
Rachel Stevenson broke into the library to murder her best friend.
After she confessed, Inspector007 (who was in charge of the case) had Rachel placed under medical supervision to determine if she was in a state of possible insanity at the time of the murder.
The doctors concluded that the young woman suffered from serious psychological problems and should therefore be medically monitored during her imprisonment.
At the trial, Rachel stated that she murdered Ashley "to live her love with Josh (one of the suspects in the case) to the fullest without having to suffocate the shadow Ashley created. Her lawyer is asleep and has already decided to appeal.
The seven other suspects in the case have been cleared and have not wished to speak out.
The victim's parents, for their part, answered the journalists' questions and said they were "very affected by this news", as Rachel was for them a girl "who could easily be trusted and who never made a story". The family and relatives were given psychological care.
This murder therefore raises the question of whether psychological disorders can be detected quickly or not, because in locurence, Rachel had been suffering from her disorders for an extremely long time.
Now that the judgment has been handed down, there is every reason to believe that the Johnson family will do everything in their power to return to some semblance of normal life as quickly as possible.
Merci beaucoup !
- Donner des informations sur le crime commis en utilisant le prétérit simple
- Expliquer le travail de la police en utilisant la voix passive au passé
- Raconter comment le criminel a été arrêté en utilisant le prétérit BE + V-ing
Voici le texte :
Yesterday afternoon, the New York court handed down its verdict: The murderer of Ashley Johnson, the famous heiress of "Johnson" perfumes, was sentenced to life imprisonment.
The facts date back to last December, at the victim's birthday party.
Rachel Stevenson broke into the library to murder her best friend.
After she confessed, Inspector007 (who was in charge of the case) had Rachel placed under medical supervision to determine if she was in a state of possible insanity at the time of the murder.
The doctors concluded that the young woman suffered from serious psychological problems and should therefore be medically monitored during her imprisonment.
At the trial, Rachel stated that she murdered Ashley "to live her love with Josh (one of the suspects in the case) to the fullest without having to suffocate the shadow Ashley created. Her lawyer is asleep and has already decided to appeal.
The seven other suspects in the case have been cleared and have not wished to speak out.
The victim's parents, for their part, answered the journalists' questions and said they were "very affected by this news", as Rachel was for them a girl "who could easily be trusted and who never made a story". The family and relatives were given psychological care.
This murder therefore raises the question of whether psychological disorders can be detected quickly or not, because in locurence, Rachel had been suffering from her disorders for an extremely long time.
Now that the judgment has been handed down, there is every reason to believe that the Johnson family will do everything in their power to return to some semblance of normal life as quickly as possible.
Merci beaucoup !
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