Bonjour, quelqu'un pourrais me corriger mon texte svp? Over the years, our company has made progress to be more tolerant than in the past
Obviously our society is more tolerant there 100 years since, on the situation of women, as we can notice the status of women has changed and has become more acceptable, they now have the right to vote and have their much place in the world of work, which was not the case 100 years ago, to stay at home as housewife. But on on-there is still room for improvement. Indeed, sexism is still present, some women can not do certain jobs are considered men's work. Some women want to be equal to men being brave and courageous, but there is still a difference in the compensation they receive On the poor, there were 100 charity to collect a while operator, while maintaining the charity to the poor is to give him a room on the street, however there are still some popular soups offering them a meal.
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"Now they are allowed to vote and... " je pense que tu devrais utiliser ce bout de phrase qui fait quand même un peu mieux ;)
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je pense que tu devrais utiliser ce bout de phrase qui fait quand même un peu mieux ;)