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Introduction: Hello today I am going to speak of a very beautiful city, very abundant called London, it is a very old city because it was founded two thousand years ago by the Romans. Previously, the city was called Londonium and was in the 19th century the most populous city in the world. Development : London is the capital of England and the United Kingdom, it is located in the south-east of Great Britain. London is also located in Europe. the inhabitants of london are called londoner , and they speak english. London is most known for many historical monuments. Here are some examples of some famous historical monuments: Big Ben, Westminster Abbey, Tower of London, Buckingham Palace, etc... My favorite historical monument is Tower of London because I like its story inside this monument. There are many rooms to visit inside the tower and what I like more is the jewelry of the queen. When I first stepped inside the room where the queen's jewelry was, I was fascinated by the amazing jewelry all the queens of England had owned. It was amazing to see it in real and it was such an amazing experience. When I stayed in London with my family, we went to many restaurants, and we ate such delicious food! We ate one of the typical dishes out there which was Fish and Chips. The fish over there was very yummy and it wasn't like a fish we would normally eat in France. Also, when I visited London, my family bought me a souvenir from this amazing trip. In addition, we stayed in a hotel in London which our view from our room was Tower Bridge. It was a very pretty view because when the bridge opened, the boats could come and it was amazing. I would never forget this awesome trip and I've visited so many things!
Introduction: Hello, I’m going to speak today about a very beautiful and old city called London. It used to be called Londonium and was in the 19th century the most populous city in the world.
Development: London is the capital of England and is located in the south-east of Great Britain. London is also located in Europe. Londoners are called Londoners and speak English. London is best known for its many historical monuments. Some examples of famous historical monuments: Big Ben, Westminster Abbey, London Tower, Buckingham Palace, etc...
My favourite historical monument is the Tower of London because I love its history inside this monument. There are a lot of rooms to visit inside, and what I love most is the queen’s jewelry. When I first entered the room where the queen’s jewels were, I was fascinated by the beauty of the jewels. It was wonderful to see it in real life and it was such a rewarding experience.
When I stayed in London with my family, we went to many restaurants and had delicious meals! We ate one of the typical dishes that were at Fish and Chips. The fish there was exquisite and was not a fish that we ate made like in France. In addition, during my visit to London, my family bought me a souvenir to memorize this extraordinary trip. In addition, we stayed at a hotel in London where our room was Tower Bridge. From the bottom there was a very nice view when the bridge was opened, boats could come and it was incredible. I’ll never forget this fantastic trip
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Introduction: Hello, I’m going to speak today about a very beautiful and old city called London. It used to be called Londonium and was in the 19th century the most populous city in the world.
Development: London is the capital of England and is located in the south-east of Great Britain. London is also located in Europe. Londoners are called Londoners and speak English. London is best known for its many historical monuments. Some examples of famous historical monuments: Big Ben, Westminster Abbey, London Tower, Buckingham Palace, etc...
My favourite historical monument is the Tower of London because I love its history inside this monument. There are a lot of rooms to visit inside, and what I love most is the queen’s jewelry. When I first entered the room where the queen’s jewels were, I was fascinated by the beauty of the jewels. It was wonderful to see it in real life and it was such a rewarding experience.
When I stayed in London with my family, we went to many restaurants and had delicious meals! We ate one of the typical dishes that were at Fish and Chips. The fish there was exquisite and was not a fish that we ate made like in France. In addition, during my visit to London, my family bought me a souvenir to memorize this extraordinary trip. In addition, we stayed at a hotel in London where our room was Tower Bridge. From the bottom there was a very nice view when the bridge was opened, boats could come and it was incredible. I’ll never forget this fantastic trip
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