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Hello, today I'm going to be talking about a very populated country called London. London is situated in England and it's capital is London. London is also located in Europe. This country speaks english and is most known for many historical monuments. Here are some examples of some famous historical monuments: Big Ben, Westminster Abbey, Tower of London, Buckingham Palace, etc...
My favourite historical monument is Tower of London because I like its story inside this monument. There are many rooms to visit inside the tower and what I like more is the jewellry of he queen. When I first stepped inside the room where the queen's jewellry was, I was fascinated by the amazing jewellry all the queens of England had owned. It was amazing to see it in real and it was such an amazing experience.
When I stayed in London with my family, we went to many restaurants and we ate such delicious food! We ate one of the typical dishes out there which was Fish and Chips. The fish over there was very yummy and it wasn't like a fish we would normally eat in France. Also, when I visited London, my family bought me a souvenir from this amazing trip. In addition, we stayed in a hotel in London which our view from our room was Tower Bridge. It was a very pretty view because when the bridge opened, the boats could come and it was amazing. I would never forget this awesome trip and I've visited so much things!
Hello, today I'm going to be talking about a very populated country called London. London is situated in England and it's capital is London. London is also located in Europe. This country speaks english and is most known for many historical monuments. Here are some examples of some famous historical monuments: Big Ben, Westminster Abbey, Tower of London, Buckingham Palace, etc...
My favourite historical monument is Tower of London because I like its story inside this monument. There are many rooms to visit inside the tower and what I like more is the jewellry of he queen. When I first stepped inside the room where the queen's jewellry was, I was fascinated by the amazing jewellry all the queens of England had owned. It was amazing to see it in real and it was such an amazing experience.
When I stayed in London with my family, we went to many restaurants and we ate such delicious food! We ate one of the typical dishes out there which was Fish and Chips. The fish over there was very yummy and it wasn't like a fish we would normally eat in France. Also, when I visited London, my family bought me a souvenir from this amazing trip. In addition, we stayed in a hotel in London which our view from our room was Tower Bridge. It was a very pretty view because when the bridge opened, the boats could come and it was amazing. I would never forget this awesome trip and I've visited so much things!
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Hello, today I'm going to be talking about a very populated country called London. London is situated in England and it's capital is London. London is also located in Europe. This country speaks English (au lieu de english) and is most known for many historical monuments. Here are some examples of some famous historical monuments: Big Ben, Westminster Abbey, Tower of London, Buckingham Palace, etc...
My favorite (au lieu de favourite) historical monument is Tower of London because I like its story inside this monument. There are many rooms to visit inside the tower and what I like more is the jewelry (au lieu de jewellry) of the (au lieu de he) queen. When I first stepped inside the room where the queen's jewelry (au lieu de jewellry) was, I was fascinated by the amazing jewelry (au lieu de jewellry) all the queens of England had owned. It was amazing to see it in real and it was such an amazing experience.
When I stayed in London with my family, we went to many restaurants, and (il manque une virgule)we ate such delicious food! We ate one of the typical dishes out there which was Fish and Chips. The fish over there was very yummy and it wasn't like a fish we would normally eat in France. Also, when I visited London, my family bought me a souvenir from this amazing trip. In addition, we stayed in a hotel in London which our view from our room was Tower Bridge. It was a very pretty view because when the bridge opened, the boats could come and it was amazing. I would never forget this awesome trip and I've visited so many ( au lieu de much) things!
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