Bonsoir, J'ai fais ma Tache finale en anglais ai-je fais des fautes svp Merci de votre réponse: I arrived at the school at 6 A.M and the bus wasn't still there.It arrived late.When the bus had finally arrived we got on the bus and we showed our identity cards.After we got on the bus and we went to a small shopping mall where we exchanged our currency. At 9:33 A.M it was the hour of the shuttle.We returned into the bus for take the shuttle altough we had to wait 35 minuts before arriving in England . But we had to continue the road to arrive at the museum, on the way I saw full monuments , buses ans typically English taxis.When we arrived at the museum we were divided into 2 groups, those who went in toilets and those who were going to eat.
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I got to school at 6 a.m but he buswas late and wasn't there yet. When it finally arrived we got on it and we showed our I.D. cards. Then the bus drove us to a smal shopping mall for us to exchange currency. Then we returned into the bus to take the shuttle. The time of departure was at 9:33 a.m. The trip to England took 35 (thirty-five ) minutes. The trip wasn't over and we still have to drive for a while to go to the museum. On the way we saw lots of monuments, English double-deckers buses (bus à l'impérial / à 2 étages) and the typical black cabs. (taxi en Angleterre = cabs). Once we got to the museum, we (were separated into two groups) we broke into two different groups. One went to the bathrooms and the other one had lunch.
Ce n'est pas parfait, mais mieux. Je ne suis pas sûr d'avoir tout bien compris ..
J'ai essaye d'éviter au max les répétitions.. mais il en reste. Une chose. Quand tu donnes un 1er horaire ; ici, 6:00 a.m. , il n'est pas nécessaire pour les heures qui suivent de repréciser à chaque fois a.Mm. .. cela va de soi (à moins que votre prof le demande, bien sûr) Tu reprécises quand tu passes après midi = p.m.
Il manque des lieux = d'où tu pars, la ville (Londres ??? ) où tu arrives..C'est trop imprécis. Ne connaissant pas le texte en français, ni ce que tu veux raconter, j'ai du mal à m'imaginer le voyage ...
bonne soirée :)