Bonsoir, Pourriez vous m'aider pour cette exercice ( je sais qu'il est un peu long, c'est pourquoi je met 20 points ) et avec des explications si possibles

Consigne : Cédric Lagadec's letter to East Newport Hight School : In his letter, Cédric made mistakes in the -ING forms and in the expressions he used to say what he likes. He also made a few other mistakes. Find at least 12 mistakes and correct them. There are 15 in all ! Coppy the corrected letter.

Hello !
My name is Cédric and I have 16 years . I am in " seconde " In the lycée de Montgeron and I live In Montgeron , who Is a nice bown In the suburb of Paris. I have a brother calling Michel ( 13 ) and a sister calling Aline ( 10 ) . We live in a flat not far on the school . My brither can sleep in my bedroom so my penfriend can have his room. I like play football and tennis and I keen on hard rock. On holidays in Brittany, I like to sall with my family ( my unclehad a boat in Quilberon ).
I also enjoy go to the cinema with my friends. Read is another of my favourite activity ; I enjoy books about sall, books of adventures and science fiction and books about the Second World War. History is my favourite subject at school.
Well, I thing, I have gluen the essential Informations.
I hope I will have a penfriend very soon.

Cédric


Merci d'avance