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According to regulations of BTS BTP, I have implement a training with company building construction Arcas, as trainee, the project is composed of 3 floors, one car park, with 27 collective housing. The building it’s composed concrete shell, blockwork wall, floor in reinforced concrete, foundation beam, concrete base with different depth, 70 cm and 40 cm. I have got remark in the building site, work it’s difficult, because of inclement weather, and long working day, manage unforessen.
I have read the dimensioned drawing as well as documents as CCTP, during my intern ship I have realized a 3D model with the software Revit by Autodesk, and Lumion to in order to have an overview of the project. I took several weeks to realized it. This training has confirmed my choice of work in the work station on clerical work.
At the BTS BTP, I would like to do a bachelor’s degree or integrate an engineering school to be able to work in architect cabinet. I want to be BIM Manager or industrial designer/ elaborator designer, for that minimum Bac+3 but the must it’s the Master.
In accordance with the regulation of BTS BTP, I set up a training with the construction company Arcas, as well as trainee, that the project includes three floors, parking and 27 collective housing. The building consists of a concrete shell, a concrete block wall, a reinforced concrete floor, a foundation beam, a concrete base of different depths, 70 cm and 40 cm .
I arrived on the site, the work is difficult, because of the weather, and the long day of work, I handle unexpected.
I read the quoted drawing as well as the CCTP documents. During my internship, I realized a 3D model with Revit software from Autodesk and Lumion to get an overview of the project. I took several weeks to realize.
This training confirmed my choice of Workstation.
In the BTS BTP, I would like to do a bachelor's degree or integrate an engineering school to work in an architectural firm. I wish to be responsible BIM or industrial designer / designer designer, for this minimum Bac + 3 but the must, it is the master.
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In accordance with the regulation of BTS BTP, I set up a training with the construction company Arcas, as well as trainee, that the project includes three floors, parking and 27 collective housing. The building consists of a concrete shell, a concrete block wall, a reinforced concrete floor, a foundation beam, a concrete base of different depths, 70 cm and 40 cm .
I arrived on the site, the work is difficult, because of the weather, and the long day of work, I handle unexpected.
I read the quoted drawing as well as the CCTP documents. During my internship, I realized a 3D model with Revit software from Autodesk and Lumion to get an overview of the project. I took several weeks to realize.
This training confirmed my choice of Workstation.
In the BTS BTP, I would like to do a bachelor's degree or integrate an engineering school to work in an architectural firm. I wish to be responsible BIM or industrial designer / designer designer, for this minimum Bac + 3 but the must, it is the master.