hi can you help me please i have a writing in whish i must introduce myself
here is an example can you correction to me????
dear ahmed
hi my name is safae i'm 14 years old i'm student in 3 class in college my favorite school subject is physics i like it because it's very interesting
i live in meknes morocco in essalam district with my family my father abdessalam he is an arabic teacher and my mother nedia my sister and my brother aya and ahmed they are twins they have 9 years old they study in 3 grade in primary
i love the mroccains dishes mostly a Tajin and Tanjiya
best wishes
here is an example can you correction to me????
dear ahmed
hi my name is safae i'm 14 years old i'm student in 3 class in college my favorite school subject is physics i like it because it's very interesting
i live in meknes morocco in essalam district with my family my father abdessalam he is an arabic teacher and my mother nedia my sister and my brother aya and ahmed they are twins they have 9 years old they study in 3 grade in primary
i love the mroccains dishes mostly a Tajin and Tanjiya
best wishes
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Dear Ahmed,
Hi, my name is Safae. I'm 14 years old and I'm a 3rd class of secondary school student. My favorite school subject is physics : I like it because it's very interesting!
I live in Meknes morocco in the district of Essalam with my family. My father Abdessalam is an arabic teacher and my mother Nedia (?)... My sister and my brother, Aya and Ahmed, are twins. They are 9 years old and they study in the 3rd grade in primary school.
I love Maghrebi dishes mostly Tajin and Tanjiya.
Best wishes!
1. Please, be careful with punctuation. It's very important because it helps people understanding better your work.
2. College =/= Collège! College = University, and I don't think that you're old enough to be there...?
Since you've written that you are a student of a 3rd year class of a secondary school, i suppose that you're a 9th grade student!
(If you're not in France, please excuse me then. <- That's why I didn't change much for the school system details!)
3. You didn't say anything about your mother, something missing! :(
4. TO BE 9 years old and not to have 9 years old! Big mistake >o<
5. Verify every name (country, city etc..) too :D!