Bonjour , j'aimerais une correction à mon oral d'anglais , cela parle des beatles merci d'avance ! III : THE BEATLES : I'm goind to talk about "The Beatles." A group of music that I appreciate very much. The Beatles are a 60s music band. The Beatles is a British band from Liverpool, including John Lennon, Paul McCartney, George Harrison and Ringo Starr. Before being the Beatles it was known as "Johnny and the Moondogs" comes after the name "The Beatles Money" and finally the Beatles in 1960. In August, they went to Hamburg, Germany, with a Pete Best who will eventually be their new drummer. Back in Liverpool, they stay at the Cavern Club and go to Germany to record their first song "My Bonnie" in 1964. In November, "Brian Epstein" an artistic agent with a record store, becomes their manager. They got a contract with EMI in 1962, and recorded "Love me do" in 1963. Meanwhile, they found a new drummer named Ringo Starr. Their first album "Please, Please Me" is released on March 22, 1963 deviates the 1st ranking. I am the abum "She Loves You" which becomes the hit transforms the public an addict of the group which creates the "Beatlemania". The group is so loved by all that it produces before the Queen of England. Working the singles and the tours on August 6, 1965 they released the album "Help!". The song "Yesterday" of the album has become the most played song and more world record. In 1966, the album "Rubber Soul" and "Revolver" came out with a new style of music quite different from the other albums. Desiring to have a rest period, the band played for the last time at the candlestick park in San Francisco. In 1967, the group released "Sergeant Pepper Lonely Hearts Club Band" with a psychedelic sound with "Penny Lane", "Strawberry Fields Forever" and "Lucy And The Sky with Diamonds". They then offer the song "All You Need Is Love" hippie in a period before going to a meditation room in India. During their journey, their Manager Brian Epstein commits suicide with an overdose in his bed. On November 68, is written the double album "The White Album" which offers songs "solo" musicians. The union of the group is divided by the presence of the companion of Lennon, Yoko Ono. Tensions appear within the group. The group released its latest album, "Abbey Road" and "Let It Be" in 1970, before finally separating. Jhon lennon will die on 8 December 1980 in New York The ex-Beatle George Harison will die on Thursday in Los Angeles at the age of 58 in 2001. Paul McCartney continues to sing and intends to answer these tours again.
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Bonjour , quelqu'un peut me corriger mon début d'oral eng merci d'avance :The baseball story and rules:I will tell you about baseball, stories and rules, a sport that I love very much and which I practiced a long time ago.Baseball is a collective sport derived from the same roots as cricket, the date of creation of sport is still indeterminate, but these rules were formalized in the United States since 1845.The origins of the sport being for a part "European" one was always neglected by the American authorities, in order that the sport is kindly American.Currently there are still hypotheses about the true history of sport.Now I will tell you about the rules of Baseball:Baseball is played with two teams of nine players passing alternately in defense and attack.In attack, players must strike with their stick a ball thrown by the defending team's pitcher. Once the ball is hit, they must run and pass through each of the three goals before returning to the marble.In defense, players are responsible for retrieving the ball when hit by the batter. A defensive player is the ball thrower (thrown towards the batter) also called the pitcher, he can only physically get out of the batting box once the ball is hit correctly by the batter.The goal of the defensive team is to eliminate three strikers, so to pass in turn to attack and thus try to score points.A team can score only if it is in an attack position. A point is marked as soon as an offensive player passes the race, in one or more phases of play, by each of the three bases of the playing area and joins the starting base (base from which he hit the ball ).The baseball games are broken down into 9 innings. Each sleeve is divided into two (the top and bottom of the sleeve): the first team starts with the stick and the other team receives. Then the two teams exchange their roles, the first team passes to the throw and the other to the bat.
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Correction de mon debut d'oral eng the baseball , story and rules :I will tell you about baseball, stories and rules, a sport that I love very much and which I practiced a long time ago.Baseball is a collective sport derived from the same roots as cricket, the date of creation of sport is still indeterminate, but these rules were formalized in the United States since 1845.The origins of the sport being for a part "European" one was always neglected by the American authorities, in order that the sport is kindly American.Currently there are still hypotheses about the true history of sport.Now I will tell you about the rules of Baseball:Baseball is played with two teams of nine players passing alternately in defense and attack.In attack, players must strike with their stick a ball thrown by the defending team's pitcher. Once the ball is hit, they must run and pass through each of the three goals before returning to the marble.In defense, players are responsible for retrieving the ball when hit by the batter. A defensive player is the ball thrower (thrown towards the batter) also called the pitcher, he can only physically get out of the batting box once the ball is hit correctly by the batter.The goal of the defensive team is to eliminate three strikers, so to pass in turn to attack and thus try to score points.A team can score only if it is in an attack position. A point is marked as soon as an offensive player passes the race, in one or more phases of play, by each of the three bases of the playing area and joins the starting base (base from which he hit the ball ).The baseball games are broken down into 9 innings. Each sleeve is divided into two (the top and bottom of the sleeve): the first team starts with the stick and the other team receives. Then the two teams exchange their roles, the first team passes to the throw and the other to the bat.merci pour vos aides d'avance.
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Salut je viens de commencer mon oral d'anglais, et sans mentir j'ai un peu de mal avec l'anglais donc si un correcteur peut mon conseiller merci :D LP I'm goind to talk about Laura Pergolizzi, Laura Pergolizzi, known as LP, born on March 18, nineteen eighty-one in Huntington (United States), is an American singer-songwriter she is Originally New York. High school graduate in one thousand nine hundred and ninety-five. In 2001 she signed as an independent artist, then in 2006 she was signed by a big label of which she stayed there three years. She is in couple with the singer and model Lauren Ruth Ward. in 20 years, LP released three solo albums : • She released her first album in two thousand and first, this name is "Heart-Shaped Scar" • Suburban Sprawl & Alcohol two thousand and fourteenth and • Forever Now (2014) LP Songwriting more twenty-three musics for movie, exemple : in the movie "Sorry I'm Late" she as writes music "Human". She plays the guitar and the ukulele and the Harmonica. In these clips, they way play with his Ukulele, exemple "lost on you». She whritting more 150 music for artiste exemple : rihanna, christina Aguilera and Cher Lloyd, She writes her songs from these encounters with other artists She was inspired by Freddie Mercury, Bob Dylan and Woody Guthrie. These tastes are called "electric". She appreciates the vocal power of the singers, like Maria Callas (Opera rock star singer). She has become opera, which has influenced her music, which is dramatic. The type of music LP offers is Folk Opera. Oeuvre: Lost on you “Lost on you” exit in 2016, is best clip for Laura Pergolizzi. He has made more than eighty-five million views on YouTube. This music is based on the relationship of the composer with her former girlfriend, because she leaves it. Because of its release its label la licensee <- à voir une meillieure traduction Personnal Story She has a tattoo representing a ship on her chest. It means for the singer the denouement with all these misfortunes of her life, which expresses the journey which is for her a way of turning a page.
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