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Bac d'anglais ! Bonsoir si vous voulez bien me donner un vis sur mon texte tout en corrigeant mes erreurs cela me rendrait un grand service; The progress its believing that the world can change and be better in terms of arts, sciences, technology, liberty and quality of life. Progress implies changes, some evolution from an old order with traditions to a new order . But still the issue is debated among conscientious people whether progress is a blessing or a curse for humanity. There are many kinds of progress so let us discuss about the technological with the social. I will tackle this theme throughout are new technologies isolating people or reinforcing their links? I / New technologies allow us to stay in touch in a way that has never been possible before II / but they can also isolate people. To illustrate this notion I’ll choose document based on different sides of the technological progress. Betweens family’s member’s .Family is very precious for me and in class we saw some innovations that permitted to reinforcing the links with them. We can take a look at the document about the « senior citizen blogger ». Thanks to the computers some seniors can experiment the fact of having a blog. We know that with the creation of the blogs the seniors will be more focused on the internet’s world. And I can supposed that in their family they will be more closed with their grandchildren’s because it’s another point of common that they could have ! I can imagine them instead of play « bingo, needled point » sitting front of their computers dealing with their grandchilds. But there is some families where the people don’t know their grandfathers (ex) and this can being a failures for them. But now with some machines, internet even blogs they can find quickly , easily one member of they family. Like in the text « how genealogy works ». We can, see that they detailled the positive aspect of internet in this researches that can change the links in many families and renforcing because they will not have the feeling of a lack. With the world too Youtube !! listening music from different countries and different styles can permite to being more open minded. But in youtube not just music’s videos can do this jobs I take the example of the khan academy whcich proposed watching videos for learning subjects about the art, maths etc with only the voice and diagrams. So the etudiants can see many ways of teaching lessons and speak with others etudiants in the comments like in some blogs too. So this can renforcing the links with the people around the world the links of helping each other’s. When we are with ur phones communicating with someone, nothing else matters. We completely forget the exterior .And I think that it’s not a good attitude because in repetition it seems weird. Like in the text « when technology fails » extract of …., we can noticed that when the electricity stopped working the little boy didn’t know how to spend his time he seems bored. Which for my point of view its ridiculous because he can spend time talking with his dad. But maybe it’s someone who’s dependent like some seniors. Because when you begin to do something in the internet it’s very hard to stop it according to …. ..and in the audio « internet addiction » when …explain that he’s addicted to the video games, he can spend a half of his day playing it. Thats why some industries were created to help this people who are isolating in their « cavern » like the …..(Citer). Because this addictions can be has strenght a nightmare routine. As we can see in the series black mirror which is the anticipation of our future for the addicted person. In the extract there is a weird and tired person who’s life turning around the technologies. No real things, ex fake instruments no social interaction no kitchens. He was in a freaky virtual life! As an teenager i’d like to use my phone , computers , youtube etc because it can help me when I’m bored or when I have some difficult homeworks . But I am totally agree with the fact that sometimes people let’s the technologies control themself and their life as their depended on it . I think that if they take the time spending on their phones to go out they can meet fantastic persons maybe it’s an example … but Iam, sure that this could be more benefit for them and their relationships!
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bac d'anglais !! s'il vous plait vous pouvez me corriger mon texte et me dire si il est conventionnel Introduction : Believing that the world can change and be better in terms of arts, sciences, technology, liberty and quality of life. Progress implies changes, some evolution from an old order with traditions to a new order wich is not embraced by all because everybody isn’t comfortable with the changes being made. There are many kinds of progress so i choose the social progress I will tackle this theme throughout the evolution of the customs over the time how does the evolution of society influences the customs (les mœurs)/ statues of womens and seniors? I will begin with an insight into the film the sufragettes by sarah gravon detailing the push for women's suffrage in the United Kingdom in 1911-13 after, I will analyse malala's history and to conclude I would like to talk about a the apparition of a funny event the senior citizen blogger. Development : In class we have been concentrated on the evolution of the society realtive to the women. The womens who were considered as inferior of the mens.As we can see in the film the sufragettes focused on a group of women who’s fighting for their rights of vote. In this film we can see the lifestyle of these « irrespected » women in the 20 century. They was working very hard in the laundries where their chiefs exploit them , and when they arrived in their home their husbands telling us that women’s role are to be a good mother and and satisfy her husband’s desires. However and althought the many obstacles that they have overcome they continue to fight with the hope of the society’s evolving in their favor. But unfortunatly even if some situation have changed in some countries , some others kept a delicate status about this. As the pakistan , where women’s situation it’s really hard since years and with the addition since 2000 of the evolving of the attacks and invasions its just aggravates the problem ! And this situation its develop in the portrait of the « girl blogger » nickname of malala yousafzai that we can compared to the sufraggette . WHY ? my impression is that even if she’s alone (not in a group like the sufragettes ) and doesn’t fight for the same subject she’s fighting for the women’s rights. In 2009 talibans controlled a part of the pakistan in making their own sexist rules « they banned women from going to the market and they banned shopping » Even going as far as taking the assault of a schoolbus and shoot childrens like her when she was 12. But as the suffragette she found the courage to testify, address herself and commit to the rights of women’s educations until received peace nobel prize. To conclude, we will focused on the senior citizen blogger who were especially in vancouver , chicago etc... This (chercher nom dossier » showus that there is an evolution of the senior’s hobbits . After the 20 century the senior’s hobbits was for the main part to play « bingo, needle point etc… » but now there is a real advances. Some seniors want to take part in the evolving of the society . So alone or with the help « trouver la phrase » they began to write a blog about what they like in life as a new hobbit. Now in their family i can supposed that between the grandsparents and their grandchildren they will have more proximity because they will have more common points . And i think that the grandparents will feel younger ! So to recap I’d like to wind up by saying that we can’t ignored the evolution of our society for my point of view. Some womens fought for us and i think that its my work (our work) to continue their working. Because in 2018 we are not completely free and its not right ! In addition as a human nothing its impossible like the seniors who try to change their statu of « people who can’t do anything modern » we must be courageous !
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