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Charity love is an association that I created recently to help the poor . For that , we distribute meals , clothing and covers for poor people and beggars in the streets . To help many people , you must to join my cause .
Winter is coming and with the cold, it will become difficult for the homeless.
Join my association because the share is importante , importante for me , for you and for them . Change the world by becoming a volunteer .
Charity love is an association that I created recently to help the poor . For that , we distribute meals , clothing and covers for poor people and beggars in the streets . To help many people , you must to join my cause .
Winter is coming and with the cold, it will become difficult for the homeless.
Join my association because the share is importante , importante for me , for you and for them . Change the world by becoming a volunteer .
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BonjourCharity Love is an association that I recently created to help homeless people .
(les sans-abris...ça me semble mieux que "les pauvres" d'autant que tu le répètes ensuite). In order to ameliorate their lives, we distribute meals, clothes, blankets to people in need (aux gens dans le besoin) in the streets.
To help so many people, we need you to join my struggle (pour aider tant de gens, nous avons besoin que vous rejoignez mon combat.)
Winter is coming soon. The cold weather is going to affect all the homeless people.
It's time for you to join my association because sharing is important, important for me, for you and above all for them.
Becoming a volunteer will help the world to change .
J'ai changé quelques tournures de phrases....pour éviter, entre autres, des répétitions !!
bonne soirée !!