Bonjour a tous , pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce texte.
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Pour le premier paragraphe il faut enlever “the” pour que cela devienne “-Last night [•••]”, ensuite il faut mettre: Mr Curtis was et in his parent’s house. Pour le deuxième paragraphe il faut mettre “in” au lieu de”at” pour que cela devienne “in first [•••]” ensuite modifie: “the knife is staying” par “the knife was forgotten into the crime scene” Et enfin pour le troisième paragraphe change “he have” par “he took”. J’ai fait de mon mieux... désolé si il y a des erreurs et bon courage pour la suite
_Last night, on 19th February 2014, a murder was committed in Chelsea. Mr Curtis was kill with a knife in his parent’s house
_First, this investigation was entrusted to the inspector Murfy. The Victim was find in his bed. He was sleeping when he was stab. The knife stayed at the crime scene. Thanks to this knife, inspector Murfy was able to identify the fingerprints and found the murderer.
_Finally, the murderer was Mr Gurckly, his neighbor. The inspector stopped him, Mr Gurckly confessed the murder, and he was judge. He went to the prison for 45 years.
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Merci beaucoup pour votre aide. Bonne soirée
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Pour le deuxième paragraphe il faut mettre “in” au lieu de”at” pour que cela devienne “in first [•••]” ensuite modifie: “the knife is staying” par “the knife was forgotten into the crime scene”
Et enfin pour le troisième paragraphe change “he have” par “he took”.
J’ai fait de mon mieux... désolé si il y a des erreurs et bon courage pour la suite
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_Last night, on 19th February 2014, a murder was committed in Chelsea. Mr Curtis was kill with a knife in his parent’s house
_First, this investigation was entrusted to the inspector Murfy. The Victim was find in his bed. He was sleeping when he was stab. The knife stayed at the crime scene. Thanks to this knife, inspector Murfy was able to identify the fingerprints and found the murderer.
_Finally, the murderer was Mr Gurckly, his neighbor. The inspector stopped him, Mr Gurckly confessed the murder, and he was judge. He went to the prison for 45 years.